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2024-11-21 02:01

A good story, the situation of MC in the first chapter seem like an other fic with a concept similar. But the story is différents and not a plagiat. The story is well construct. But in two chapters the MC broke the 4th Wall ( he talk about the number of chapter he take care of a villain and joke about it . ) If the MC can break the 4th Wall like Deadpool why only two time in 68 chapters. Maybe edit this "joke" since is a little bad for immersion.

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