Author's Thought: I had basically started this book with an OP Harry Potter for harem and R18. But now, I am structuring this book properly. Their will be involvement of the politics of Wizarding world, the intrigues associated with the politics, magical houses and the family magic. Things will unravel with time and mysterious solved. Stay tuned and continue your support.

Literal fucking Rape in this story please author put this in your synopsis because that shit is crazy. You make an OP character he sees statutory rape and he's like nah I'm not gonna do shit. You're synopsis conveniently adjusts the characters age for this not to be statutory rape. I find the whole concept fucking disgusting and weird. this is not 17th century Brittain this is 20th century Brittain. What the fuck are we doing here this convenience thing with the changes of starting age of hogwarts students so it is not statutory rape is honestly insane.

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I think there was already another book similar to this one. but I can't remember the title. anyway, here you go. 5 star for making me remember. I got too many books in my personal list that I sometimes forgot some story that I had listed.

Hello Author here... Through this review, I want to address two issues about my fanfiction. First, I have suddenly started to get numerous comments about my bad grammar and trash english. I do not deny about presence of somemistakes but I believe that my language is easily comprehensible and the mistakes are such which can be easily ignored. Even so, I will try to pay more attention towards it. The second issue is about my chapter length. They are of average 1000 words and that is what I can write in a day. I cannot dedicate more time to it. I am not translating any book. I have to think things and then pen it down and it takes enough time. While I do earn some financial support from my readers, it is a small sum. I have to manage a lot of other things. I can combine 2 or 3 chapters into one and release 2 or 3 chapters in a week but that would reduce the visibility of my book. Hence, I prefer to release one chapter a day. And this would remain how it is.

The story is very interesting! Although there are some timeline inconsistencies, especially regarding ages, they’re easy to overlook. So far (chapter 24), I’m really enjoying the narrative and hope it keeps up this quality.

The character seems smart to like a ten yr old but it's a really mid-story he's just a NPC who just lets things happen and then drops one-liners like how deep. Bro could have done a lot of stuff but no he's just a talker. idc that he's not a pure hero that's fine with me, id rather him be a villain and take over the world rather than this nonsense.

This was an unbelievable hard read… everything just felt so forced and the story telling in my opinion is mediocre.

its an AU and kinda bad, Hermione became a mindless robot for pleasure here she's smart in the OG but here she doesn't ask questions why harry became smart and learned a lot of magic or wandless magic she just became an onahole

Rating 3.2 for the following reasons: 1. Writing Quality (2 stars): It is a book written in English. Unfortunately, either the author doesn't have time to review his writing or perhaps its his 2nd or 3rd language. The writing quality is sub-par at best and while you can understand the story with little problems, you must constantly adjust the grammar in your head to make sense of certain sentences (about 4-5 per chapter of about 1000 words I believe the author mentionned.) 2. Updating Stability (4 stars): I cannot give more information since I have binged read this fanfic up to chapter 58 where I decided to make the review. From the stats I can see, the author releases 5 chapters per week of once again 1000 words. It is a nice stability but to be homest the chapters are a bit too small which causes the flow of the story to break inbetween every other chapters. 3. Story Development (3 stars): The story is pretty straight-forward and altough it lags in between chapters, it is a pretty nice novel. Unfortunately, the 3 stars is purely my personal opinion. Some decisions and story points seems questionable but I won't go into details since it would be a spoiler for anyone who reads this review. PS: Author please add the tag of RAPE or Sexual Assault in the synopsis which is a major downside/turnoff for many readers who would rather not read of such a subject. While it is very present in our society, as readers we hope to immerse ourselves in the story and this subject is unfortunately taboo for many readers. Adding the tag would only prevent many from wasting their time on an otherwise nice story or simply let them know that such a thing will happen in the story. 4. Character Design (4 stars): I love how you depict the 'new' Harry Potter. While not fully fleshed out yet nor having explained many of his current actions, I once again believe that perhaps a few additional hundred words in your chapter could allow you to rationalize the character's actions without having to leave your author notes at the bottom to allow us to understand the current scenario. Finally, when portraying McGonagall in your latest chapters, please remember that she is a professor and in the end, the safety and well-being of students is paramount no matter the political intrigues of adults. 5. World Background (3 stars): It is a basic Harry Potter world except for the obvious changes such as increasing their ages. For the moment, nothing as really been added to the world background except for the Potter's Estate which the author didn't go into great details in. To conclude, author, you have a really nice story lined up and with a few adjustments it could reach yet another height. I will give my recomendations below and feel free to ignore them if you feel that they are useless. After all, it is your fanfic and we are only readers! Recommendations: A. Grammar - Perhaps writing in google docs before copy pasting on Inkstone for Webnovel would allow you to spot errors more easily. Otherwise, once done with your text, simply copying it in google translate and having it read it to you would allow you to perfectly spot any lack or errors in your current text. B. Details - Simply adding 100-200 words in your chapter would allow you to flesh out your character and details of their surroundings more easily. Of course, it would take a bit more time. C. Story Development - Perhaps trying to focus a bit more on the magic of the Harry Potter world and less on the intrigues of Dumbledore and others would do well for your fanfic. After all, the main character regressed from hundreds of years to his 18's. He surely would have developed intriguing and useful magics or explored some rare secrets or locations. Adding perhaps new magical animals or rare plants or treasure location he knows of could be interesting. D. Tag - I say it again but adding the Rape or Sexual Assault tag would be quite useful for your fanfic as otherwise people will only curse at you once they reach that part and stop reading from there (which I will unfortunately due to personnal reasons.). Adding the tag will also allow your readers to know what they dive in. It would be the same for the Harem tag if you plan on making one as you mentionned not being certain about Ginny. E. Character Design - Now that is personnal preference but perhaps revising how you wrote professor McGonagall would be useful as she is decisively different and while not bad since it's your fanfic, it may stop many readers once more. Simply giving her more empathy would do great for her. F. World Background - Once again, exploring the secrets of Hogwarts (feel free to create them yourself) or simply the forbidden forest or shopping in Diagon Alley would give depth to your fanfic that it is currently lacking. With this, sorry for the long review, I now stand at almost 5000 character which is a lot more than I was planning om doing. However, I want to thank you for the great fanfic you brought to us and while I will unfortunately not be continuing along with you, I wish you all of the best!