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unclleLv22mth
2024-12-14 22:15

The translation is very bad. That's the first thing. The story itself is good and the writing is okay, but I liked the overall atmosphere of the world. The black mark optimization concept is a bit worn out but okay too. The background and atmosphere of the world are what carry the story ...as the characters are not that good.

Night of Despair

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411 Chs

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thunderpants
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night writing story, mc is very sick with a fever and is teleported into a different world, he is saved by a strange deformed girl he calls the stammering girl. Everything is old and run down, and the whole village looks abandoned the home the girl is in, is moldy. He is shocked when a faceless white humanoid creature appears, and just as he is about go be killed the stammering girl appears and kills it. He is told there are creatures everywhere, and the girl hands him a glowing runestone, with a symbols saying only the stones can resist them so they can be killed, he is told of the other dangers, the black ones who take the form of others to trick you to getting close to them. The shadow scarab at night, scarabs made of shadows come to devour all living creatures, but if they absorb light they die, the problem is they consume the items generating light, he watches as the candles actually shrink as the bugs are dissolved, He is told not to outside after dark, because of the big ones, giant bear sized ticks. He is handed a newspaper and is shocked he can somehow understand a language he has never seen before, and he finds out about how the government abandoned the area he is in years ago, and has walled off the quarantine zone which is slowing enlarging, He finds a strange tattoo on the back of his hand, it is his upgrade system, Lizard Jerky do you want to upgrade, 1 hour 45 minutes to upgrade, ding upgrade complete Protein bar, with his power to upgrade items he will survive in this new cursed world.

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ShhhLunch
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W O W Now this is a story. No more copy pastes of li zhang or wang mo. A true gem on this platform. The characters. The fight scenes. The world building. My only complaint….. author… perhaps maybe… can I chain you in my basement? It’s lovely I swear! All the moss mold lizards and rats you love to write about! Just.. give me more!!

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ParagonBonemancer
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Definitely a great novel. As expected of the author. just trust me and read this novel

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Viadhivan_Ranata
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Pertamax 😎📖🥇 Thanks for the Books!!!!! 😆 📖🍻 Oh, nobody have given a review for this yet? Let me be the first to give all five stars for all five categories for your new book 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 We are all looking forward for the next chapters 🥰📖🍷

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mellowdusk
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So far, the novel is great. An interesting and well paced plot. This is definitely a must read novel. My only issue with this novel is the translation quality.

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anurag_acharya_0473
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great novel. 5 star deserved. read it hijj

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LKingu
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This novel is interesting and well-paced. The characters aren’t fully flushed out as I’d like them to be, but they are more realistic and have their own lives. The main characters abilities were well designed and is interesting without being overly overpowered — the threats are actually dangerous and aren’t the usual face slapping troupe. It’s an enjoyable read for sure! I’d recommended it for those looking for a survival, apocalyptic, and horror-lite novel, with a decently advantaged mc.

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PDanac
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definitely a great novel!!!!!!!!!!!! I recommended you to read it !

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