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2024-12-14 22:15

The translation is very bad. That's the first thing. The story itself is good and the writing is okay, but I liked the overall atmosphere of the world. The black mark optimization concept is a bit worn out but okay too. The background and atmosphere of the world are what carry the story ...as the characters are not that good.

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night writing story, mc is very sick with a fever and is teleported into a different world, he is saved by a strange deformed girl he calls the stammering girl. Everything is old and run down, and the whole village looks abandoned the home the girl is in, is moldy. He is shocked when a faceless white humanoid creature appears, and just as he is about go be killed the stammering girl appears and kills it. He is told there are creatures everywhere, and the girl hands him a glowing runestone, with a symbols saying only the stones can resist them so they can be killed, he is told of the other dangers, the black ones who take the form of others to trick you to getting close to them. The shadow scarab at night, scarabs made of shadows come to devour all living creatures, but if they absorb light they die, the problem is they consume the items generating light, he watches as the candles actually shrink as the bugs are dissolved, He is told not to outside after dark, because of the big ones, giant bear sized ticks. He is handed a newspaper and is shocked he can somehow understand a language he has never seen before, and he finds out about how the government abandoned the area he is in years ago, and has walled off the quarantine zone which is slowing enlarging, He finds a strange tattoo on the back of his hand, it is his upgrade system, Lizard Jerky do you want to upgrade, 1 hour 45 minutes to upgrade, ding upgrade complete Protein bar, with his power to upgrade items he will survive in this new cursed world.

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