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2024-11-08 02:05

It's okay. A bit above average, it will you keep you entertained for the duration of your reading, but nothing so insane that you would talk about it with friends or something similar. From what I can tell that Grammer seems pretty good If not perfect but I suck at grammer, so who knows? My main issue with this; for some reason the author's cutting 1 chapter into 2 possibly 3? I would image this is for the chapter count so people actually click on the story but it isn't fun. It's not actually affecting our reading ability but it is quite annoying having to read what should be 1 chapter in 2 - 3 chapters! Honestly, I would recommend reading the first 20 chapters and see from their if you would like it. Everyone has small little taste differences that others don't. You should only ever use reviews for a baseline or if there's A LOT of them saying similar things. Just try it!

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...There* not "their" 😑

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