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Caedus_Aldric
Caedus_AldricLv133mth
2024-12-02 18:23

I think the story needs to be reworked because of several inconstancy for example lucifer said sariel was always jealous of him however in the backstory sariel was always detached even during the rebellion

Lucifer, But I'm Not The Devil

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Gilgamos
GilgamosLv14

Ngl this could of been good however the mc is pathetic and there’s a lot of inconsistencies in the story.

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Fanofssj_Hello
Fanofssj_HelloLv2

Grate story just needs more chapters and its all set[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=Loving it][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Jhowinchester666
Jhowinchester666Lv1

Mas uma história que os mano abusa da IA, eu já disse monte de vezes não fiquei dependente da IA, se não sua obra fica assim com, não passa de algo medíocre, pense numa estratégia pra usar a IA é não depender dela, o autor da fanfic "teen Wolf" que tava nos top 10 aqui na webnovel, ele usa IA mas ele seguiu nosso conselho e melhorou e a obra ficou muito boa, faz o mesmo e parece de abusar da IA

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