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Mamameste
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2024-12-09 19:52

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machadogbc
machadogbcLv15

Why?

LoNeLy_BoYz
LoNeLy_BoYzLv4

Can you tell me why? Even I will put off since I look at the Rating/comment 😕 everytime I want to read an novel and etc.

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TriPlatinum
TriPlatinumLv5

Writing Quality - 2 (Slop. At least grammar isn't too bad.) Story Development - 2 (17 Chapters in and he hasn't done sh*t other than timeskip his training for 4 years. There are no subplots either or hidden agendas.) Character Design - 2 (All the characters are retarded to make up for the original authors lack of writing skills in dialogue) Updating Stability - 5 (This updates frequently) World Background - 2 (No real depth on any islands, politics, or even his df abilities) The story started off decent (being generous), but the more you read the more impatient you'll become. The mc faces no setbacks/troubles after merely making the decision he would be leaving Imple Down at some point, there are no goals the mc has, and he's not interesting as a character. Speaking of which, all characters in here have been nerfed significantly in both strength and intelligence. It's clear the original writer has no understanding of the characters at all other than their appearance and timeline actions. Too many Chinese tropes, it generally gets to a point. The characters are driven by the plot instead of the other way around, making everything sound and feel unnatural and boring. Hope I saved your time. There is much better stuff out there. I can not recommend this slop to anyone. I do recommend this translator's One Piece Admiral fanfic though. That one doesn't make the characters dumb or impulsive, mc has to use his wits and strategies to solve problems and not just force. It's also funny.

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