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2024-11-16 08:02

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One Piece: Conquering Wanokuni at Start

CosmicKaminari
4.3
177 Chs

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CosmicKaminari
CosmicKaminariAuthor

Shameless Review +1 As a big fan of kingdom-building stories, I took on this project, and I’m thrilled to say it delivers some solid kingdom-building elements! Give it a try and share your thoughts with me—I’d love to hear your feedback!

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Humbuub
HumbuubLv5

This is MC every time a young female character pops up.

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TriPlatinum
TriPlatinumLv5

Writing Quality - 2 (Slop. At least grammar isn't too bad.) Story Development - 2 (17 Chapters in and he hasn't done sh*t other than timeskip his training for 4 years. There are no subplots either or hidden agendas.) Character Design - 2 (All the characters are retarded to make up for the original authors lack of writing skills in dialogue) Updating Stability - 5 (This updates frequently) World Background - 2 (No real depth on any islands, politics, or even his df abilities) The story started off decent (being generous), but the more you read the more impatient you'll become. The mc faces no setbacks/troubles after merely making the decision he would be leaving Imple Down at some point, there are no goals the mc has, and he's not interesting as a character. Speaking of which, all characters in here have been nerfed significantly in both strength and intelligence. It's clear the original writer has no understanding of the characters at all other than their appearance and timeline actions. Too many Chinese tropes, it generally gets to a point. The characters are driven by the plot instead of the other way around, making everything sound and feel unnatural and boring. Hope I saved your time. There is much better stuff out there. I can not recommend this slop to anyone. I do recommend this translator's One Piece Admiral fanfic though. That one doesn't make the characters dumb or impulsive, mc has to use his wits and strategies to solve problems and not just force. It's also funny.

2mth
Luci_Rivers
Luci_RiversLv1

The rules of this novel are too vague to be solidified. It is mind fuckingly hard to read.

2mth
Burhan_Malik
Burhan_MalikLv4

Very nice novel MC takes a very unique path of power which l like very much

4mth
dephunkt
dephunktLv4

YAPHSMC... Yet Another Power Hungry Sociopathic Main Character.. I've had enough of these children killers.

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Praise_TheSun
Praise_TheSunLv4

Just because you are translating and do what others don’t with these Chinese brainrot ff thanks 👍🏻🔥👍🏻🔥👍🏻🔥

5mth
DarkDaoist
DarkDaoistLv6

just my two cents, if you want to write a one piece fanfic, explore the unknown fruits that can be overpowered by creativity and user themselves or simply discard devil fruits and focus on haki, science and physical developments. using crossover powers like mana, chakra and qi are cringe too.

1mth
Nuh_Uhh
Nuh_UhhLv4

This is a good story, I’ve read a bunch of it on YouTube and it’s good, hopefully you have better translation tho

4mth
Melshan
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