The level of hypocrisy of the main character is unreal and the the delusion of grandeur is of the charts. Can't say I shouldn't have expected less from this fan fic but the translation is very well done easy to read.

the translation is good but the story itself is the problem an MC who is an extreme delusional idiot who can only be matched by the average webnovel reader. and a lot of stuff goes unexplained for example how he even knows the appearance of Morgan or why he called her cute in the early chapters. it's a very promising premise that is being held back by the original author world views (china doesn't really need any more explanation) and the MC

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to be honest, I never thought I'd read something this good in webnovel. Author has cooked and is cooking. brilliant novel so far

Great story I'm gonna come back when there are more chapters i'll be back (ignore this its for word count: skibidiskibidiskibidiskibidiskibidiskibidiskibidiskibidiskibidiskibidiskibidiskibidiskibidiskibidiskibidiskibidiskibidiskibidiskibidiskibidiskibidiskibidiskibidiskibidiskibidiskibidiskibidiskibidiskibidiskibidiskibidiskibidiskibidiskibidiskibidiskibidiskibidiskibidiskibidiskibidiskibidiskibidiskibidiskibidiskibidiskibidiskibidi)

My volume of fate fanfics: Fate fake dreams(slow plot development) Fate: I Will Eventually Become the Hero of Justice (My favorite) Fate: I Heard After Death, You Can Ascend to the Throne of Heroes?(translation abandoned) Fate/Ultimate Antagonist ( completed and my second favorite) Multiverse Occultist(translation abandoned)

Average Fate fic, ie author is cooking like a chef, I am pleased. Let’s hope this doesn’t get dropped after a few chapters like most of them

I love it

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