Woo.. i like where its going, pretty good flow of the story. **BUT** what about " The supporting character's harem is very normal" what about this🤞🤞
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It's flop. The number of reader is very low, I don't have enough money to pay my editor so I have to stoped it ._. If this book has the good income, may be I will continue that book :D Thanks for your review ^^
Perhaps you should start writing interesting stories with a smart and strong main character? Instead of what you usually write? It's not surprising that your novels aren't read and you have no money.
HikaruKiki:It's flop. The number of reader is very low, I don't have enough money to pay my editor so I have to stoped it ._. If this book has the good income, may be I will continue that book :D Thanks for your review ^^
yeah, you're right, I will write a story like that. Hope you will support it in next month ^^
PRAW_NC:Perhaps you should start writing interesting stories with a smart and strong main character? Instead of what you usually write? It's not surprising that your novels aren't read and you have no money.
Beside it, I'm planning for the newbook. So, can I ask that what kind of novel do you want to read and what kind of MC do you want to see?
PRAW_NC:Perhaps you should start writing interesting stories with a smart and strong main character? Instead of what you usually write? It's not surprising that your novels aren't read and you have no money.
An Op MC that due to his powers can't feel emotions you know like MC of necromancer of shadows before he gained emotions
But with your dedication I can see that one day u will be very popular but here is an advice according to Author of RI to write a master try outlining the story before writing that means try planning the whole story before and Research famous novels and try to find what makes them popular like how they portray emotions and depth of charcter etc
HikaruKiki:Beside it, I'm planning for the newbook. So, can I ask that what kind of novel do you want to read and what kind of MC do you want to see?
I've been planning this book for over 3 months, but it doesn't seem to be what the majority of readers want. Yeah... I think I'll try a different angle, maybe the male lead will be more scheming and evil. (^_^)
Reeta_Rana_0964:But with your dedication I can see that one day u will be very popular but here is an advice according to Author of RI to write a master try outlining the story before writing that means try planning the whole story before and Research famous novels and try to find what makes them popular like how they portray emotions and depth of charcter etc
