Is it your novel or a Chinese novel? I liked the hero, frankly, and I liked the story and the clear harem.I've read 10 chapters so far and it's very good.
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LIKEwell knowing if it is an original work or not lets you know if it is worthwile to give constructive criticism or not, so it is a question i might ask myself, but at least for me: no it being a translation does not make me less likely to read it.