Thanks for the review. But I don't agree with your assessment of my main Character. I would say he is flawed, but that is simply because he is a human. A normal person. His mentality is also not that of a child but like any other guy out there. I'd like to know If you read the whole story before making this assessment, because other than the chapter he was testing his powers, he hasn't done anything that showed him acting like a child. You're free to counter though. That will help.

I've read up to the current chapter (34) as I've said it's not a bad read. There are many instances afterwards that point towards a younger character, an example is when he was texting his friend while in the shield facility concerning Thor's hammer. His overall subservient/passive demeanor towards SHIELD even though he wants nothing to do with it is like a child following his parent's orders. It's the little things that add up, but this is just my perspective of it (I could just be nitpicking). I'll still be reading and waiting for updates.