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JayrRipre14
JayrRipre14Lv12mth
2024-10-24 07:23

While not the greatest of updaters and writing style can be subjective. The world they are giving to their readers is creative and fun non the less. I am easily captivated and can't argue with the fact the creator knows what he wants and can clearly tell a story where I can turn my brain off and just read without any problem or clear confusion. I hope to see what else this story holds, but otherwise I can appreciate what is being drawn out in this fishy little world being composed before me.

My Marine System

NocturnOwl
4.7
19 Chs

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squid_guy
squid_guyLv1

I saw this book got reposted, reason not any of my business but from experience this book is a must read! An apocalyptic tale where everything came from the sea, and to the sea it will return once more, the main character seems to be special but not in a way that cops everyone, he struggles, he learns, improves. so far its intriguing how the author flushes out world building on the open sea, without it feeling like the same backdrop, its unique and its clear research was put it where its due, good job author, may your chapters be better than the last with faster updates

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Hannah_King_6215
Hannah_King_6215Lv14

As someone who has loved Gene System from this author, I recall when this story was part of a contest yet did not get placed. It is a different kinda story than anything on this platform. It is fun while utilizing important themes such as apocalyptic themes, loss, panic going through the fact you could lose everything and do. Bodily transformation and so many other scary themes I did not expect to see even though those are usual in Isekai, just nice to see something new!

2mth
Miraishoto
MiraishotoLv2

a good read, ill note this writing style for my own novel

2mth
DapacaCS
DapacaCSLv1

I am giving everything, but updates and its not because the whole thing about writing being bad. Writing and reading is subjective these days which is okay for me. This author is known for not completely always updating which is fine, but still when you have an itch and wanna scratch it and you can't that it can be annoying at times. I can always wait, but holy falcon. I would love to see what the author cooks up with more frequency. I am an oldbie who is excited to see the repost and hoping that more than anything this a good sign for the future of this book!

2mth
Theothegiant
TheothegiantLv3

this author just doesnt miss, i recommend this to anyone reading systems and apocalyptic stories!

2mth
Theothecolossal
TheothecolossalLv2

another system that's worth reading in a sea of slop (pun intended) looking forward to the next chapters!

2mth
kohimko
kohimkoLv1

Good book! Good book! Good book! Good book! Good book! I am blown away with how awesome it is! I was told to come here cause of a bestie from another testie and they told me how fun this was! I am totes buying into how nice this is and how fun a perspective can change outside of the usual stuff while also also staying true to what people like here! I am glad to see I am not the only one!

2mth
Jinxprod321111111
Jinxprod321111111Lv1

A system that isn't isekai! I did not expect that! I wonder what is gonna happen and can poor author it up where water is hard to articulate long term without hitting some sort of dead end. I agree with some of those others where it is creative and fun, but how will Rain evolve as a person in this aquatic world I am giving it ten across the board because they are braver than anything I am to make such a story.

2mth
Felcron375
Felcron375Lv1

I am one of those mixed bag peeps on this while I love this is a sea based and structured type of story and not against that while being a system does make it neat. I hope to see how this story will pick up cause while that pic is enticing I am wondering what to expect. I plan to go into this more just need more time to figure out if I dig this or not. So far is interesting at least. :3

2mth
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