*I’m biased towards more traditional literature by WN standards so take my rating with a grain of salt.* Overall fairly well written, never lacking in description would be my main positive. My sense of action and pacing never diminished. With clear thought given to the design of the story. My only complaint so far would be I don’t feel the main character. Feels a bit detached and incorporeal to the story. Some enjoy that and it could be a style choice as it is easy to immerse yourself in a self-insert way. That all being said, a good start to a novel. [img=update]

Shameless self review here.. if you're coming from my other novel expect Whispers Of The Lost to be significantly darker. This novel is the spiritual successor of Eternal Guise. I learned a lot while writing my previous novel and this is my attempt to put those lessons to use. The style is a lot different. For folks reading my work for the first time. Expect a lot of action mystery world building and a clever Mc. Give it a shot if you don't like the first chapter.. I'll be honest you probably won't like the series. To anyone else though I encourage you to give Caspian and Menthil City a chance. The world is based on Victorian England and the story takes place in Menthil a similiar place to London in the 1800s. If you enjoy lampooning i can almost guarantee you'll love this novel.

Definitely a intriguing story, the plot is interesting and the way it’s described is pretty simple and easy to understand and doesn’t rushed up. Will keep reading.

interesting good book but few chapters...and yeah the author needs some support for sure...ive read authors thoughts and...bro definitely needs some motivation or otherwise he'll die 🤣🫂

Attention:Author is cooking. I repeat, author is cooking.

Very good book with a good mc and solid surrounding cast. story doesn't hold its punches, but also doesn't force unnecessary conflicts that don't make sense. the writing is clear and descriptive, reminiscent of even traditional standards of quality.

It cured my cancer and made me not bite the dust

Author has done a good job with the story. The scenes are well written i like them. adding to my library for future updates good job author

I love how descriptive and vivid the story is. You can really tell the author put a lot of work into it. I hope the Author continues this amazing story, I will continue to support it.