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NIKHIL_J
NIKHIL_JLv16mth
2024-11-02 16:44

Interesting story keep up the good work and improve the action scenes And add up new characters and also please give moreeeee chapterssss am dying to readdd

Dragonborne with Origin System

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5.0
54 Chs

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Nachi_Keth_6058
Nachi_Keth_6058Lv1

Great backstory let's see!!! The power system too unique I think..I have read my own shares of novels especially those of system genre so since the backdrop looks cool hope for more dramatic and character involved story instead of cliche arrogant mc slapping everyone flaunting his hierarchy...do a good job..good luck

6mth

Priyank_Gowda_M_R
Priyank_Gowda_M_RLv1

Amazing story! The blend of action and emotion is perfect, and the suspense is gripping. I’m hooked and can’t wait for the next chapter. Keep it going.

6mth
Marvel_Invasion
Marvel_InvasionLv3

it's a good novel, one of a kind. hope to see more in the future

5mth
Ga_Apo
Ga_ApoModerator

Very good story wood recommend. Hope the author

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srujan_s
srujan_sLv1

Good world background good writing quality and not bland grammar with depth and updates is also good story development needs to pace up with new characters

6mth
Srujan_S_5220
Srujan_S_5220Lv1

Writing is good but you need to introduce more characters it's already been 17 chapters and I hope you do something new in the next chapters and ofcrse i wish u good luck keep up

6mth
Virat_Kohli_0528
Virat_Kohli_0528Lv1

Good story keep the goooooood woooorkkkk and ofcrse the story heeeell good neeeeeeds moreeeee chapterrrrrs to knowwwwwww Keep upppp gooooodbwork brooo

6mth
Srujan_S_4008
Srujan_S_4008Lv1

Good story good characters good background keep going so the work as you have done keep up the work and I'll provide my complete support to you...keep the mc same

6mth
Impana_H_D
Impana_H_DLv1

Wonderful story with great background and ...hope you continue to do so and bring a really interesting and unique story...also your work get recognised more .I have seen ording and pace it's great too

6mth
Vikas_H_N
Vikas_H_NLv1

Great backstory let's see!!! The power system too unique I think..I have read my own shares of novels especially those of system genre so since the backdrop looks cool hope for more dramatic and character involved story instead of cliche arrogant mc slapping everyone flaunting his hierarchy...do a good job..good luck

6mth
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