Awesome fic. Author's writing style feels like a breath of fresh air after reading the endless AI slob. A small suggestion to author : Maybe not use the same tone for all characters when doing POVs.
TheDreamofSomeday
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LIKEThird person is fine for other characters. You can still use 1st person pov if done correctly. Example - I feel Hiruzen's pov was alright but shishui's was rather unnatural. The decision is up to you bro !
TheDreamofSomeday:Thanks for the feedback and the review! I thought about that too, but the previous chapters were already written so I don’t know how it would transition well with the readers to switch to third person for other POVs. What do you think?