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2024-11-12 20:48

I'm writing this review at 10 chapters so far, and this book is heading in the right direction. However, I do want to leave some feedback as I want this book to flourish. So far this book has started out quite strongly, although it introduces a lot of characters quite fast. World building so far is top notch, with an actual sense of mystery and excitement for what is going to happen. Only feedback to give is that the pacing is a bit slow, but that's not too bad and even makes it intriguing to me. Good job! excited to see where it goes

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