even though this story is fast paced it works well as it shows all the important stuffs and skipping useless stuffs like childhood friendship etc etc good work my man

The story is face pace but I don't like the writing style. It's just a detailed report with a narration of everything. all fight scenes and story progression are all summed up like a detailed report. The thing I like about this novel is that MC didn't gain flying Raijin randomly like most fanfic, he doesn't have the talent to use it. The best part, he doesn't have a sharingan like 90% of FF. This book had potential if the author could stop writing everything like detailed information at an extremely face pace.

this story is good , the mc is not a maniac of power or a system cheater , the flow is fluid and good , the story go straight to the point , i reccomand this story

A very fast pace story taking place during the Canon timeline but with a transmigrator that doesn't play around and gets shit done unlike 99.99% of transmigrators who join during the cannon. No boring filler bullshit the fights are dope the timeline can actually be changed instead of maintaining the plot cause author is to lazy to write some original shit and for those who are part of the #AntiHaremClub this story is great choice for you weirdos 😂 Keep it up Author you are doing great things for the original fanfic community as these dam translated fanfics that currently makes up more 90% of the narutoverse fanfics its crazy.

As other comments have said it is a fast paced story no doubt about it. But it is well done for a beginner. Just some tips for the author is that for fan fics, it’s nice for the story to deviate a bit more or like to see sides of characters or interactions we wouldn’t have seen in the original story. Interactions with the main cast with the mc that goes beyond just they did this and then this happened, like actual dialogue. In general more dialogue is needed, there is not enough fleshing of characters, like kisumu that would have been fun to see more fleshed out or issha, or the master disciple relationships in the senna, more stuff about the senna in general. take some creative liberties. Since this is a WebNovel, people are gonna subscribe and tune in every update and you’ll find new people to pick it up. And if you decide to drop its a great learning experience. Expiriment more and read other Naruto fanfics if that’s your thing. But honestly I see potential keep up the great work

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