Heya! This review here is solely intended as a heads-up for my current readers and anyone considering giving this a read. This fan-fiction is a translation of the original, with a few personal edits.

It's not a good story, just a lot of angst sprinkled on every situation the MC is in . His system is useless because he is King of the Edge lords, putting even Sasuke to shame.

I seen so novels do this where the reward for chasing a girl or at least trying to get a friendly impression with her will make the mc power sky rocket but the mc always turns out to be a emo edge lord who doesn’t even want to talk to women for 5 minutes. It’s not realistic, I just don’t understand anymore it’s like these authors have something against women or something. The mc won’t talk for 5 minutes to a women but would rather spend a whole month with another man with no rewards

this is what happend when a g*y men transmigrated with harem system. you just got edge lord that think women is troublesome even with the reward for power. and he just goes with another men that doesn't even give him reward. if its doen't called it g*y idk what

Its a unique take from multiple angles. It's also a WASTE OF TIME. While author might feel satisfied with the novelty of MCs personality contradicting the system's expected route, there's a reason such contradictions aren't normally seen in novels. It's like a black hole collapsing in itself. Just bcoz u can, doesn't mean u should. It's well written tho, esp. by webnovel standards. Just a pity that the setting isn't as satisfying for the readers as is for the author. Still, if any potential readers have half an hour to waste, I suggest giving it a try. U might like it or absolutely hate it.

the mc doesn’t want the path the system set for him because his apathy to people and relationships so its interesting to see how his relationships gos and how the harem tag will be fulfilled the writing of different characters is good each with distinct flare.

Somwhat slow and there is some decision not so bright but overall a different take on the harem genre and i like it so far, even if some people will cry, edge lord and whatnot.

Man this is one of my favorite fics. The Mc is what carries the fic his personality and hope to see more chapters.

I like the story. Can you please give me the raw name of the story ?

Bueno por dónde debería empezar? La historia parece buena, lo malo sinceramente es el MC es un EMO de nivel máximo que se dono todo su dinero en equipo para verse más EMO.......de el primer capítulo al último que leí x el 60 su personalidad no cambia una mierda sinceramente si dijeras que está así por su trágico pasado podría ser pasable pero el mismo MC aclara que no es así, simplemente lo lleva a en la sangre. Después está el problema de las relaciones como con kurenai prácticamente el MC le roba un beso y quedo media traumada y asustada de el para en unos capítulos después ir enamorandose sin que el MC haga nada más que ser emo( osea ni siquiera la trata diferente es siempre la misma mierda solo que el guión ayudo acá) sería mucho mejor si el MC progresara en la personalidad del MC que en poderes y ese bromance con shisui me dio un poco de escalofríos sinceramente