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2024-10-28 01:18

Your character is quite interesting.... Her attitude is where portrayed .. It shows her behavior from her life before this reincarnation cycle then the life and frustration of a being that keeps suffering and not making it or living up to a year... Then you highlighted the emptiness already settling in ..which relates more with what your character has gone through... A marvelous world... The God also showed and the fact that it called her daughter creates a wide branch you can go to... Is she really a God's child... Then what must she predict....what future will she see... Etc.. Will she eventually find out about the fact that she is a God's child... The grammar... World building is on point. Especially the discussions.. interaction.. Conversation between characters is well done... You are talented bro and your novel is wonderful... Keep up the good work...it got me hooked ... For lovers of reincarnation mixed with an interesting MC.. This is the one for them ..

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