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Big_D_Apatheem
Big_D_ApatheemLv135mth
2024-11-17 01:26

The translation is great quality as always, tge story is just not that good unfortunately. The authors writing style is hard and boring to read, the story development is slow and pretty boring as well. I trued to force myself to keep reading, but couldnt. That said, its a rare genshin fic with a great translation and while boring, a decent enough story, so its defin readable.

Genshin Impact's Incense Burner Of Liyue.

WiseTL
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WiseTL
WiseTLAuthor

Thanks for the review! I do agree with you it's definitely more of a slow paced story, and more slice of life though it has it's moments!

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Big_D_Apatheem
Big_D_ApatheemLv13

I agree, it definetly deserves to be tried at least, the quality was good enough for that. I appreciate the work you do btw, your translations are some of the best I've ever had the pleasure of reading. Where do you even find the energy to do this much work tho😂

WiseTL:Thanks for the review! I do agree with you it's definitely more of a slow paced story, and more slice of life though it has it's moments!
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WiseTL
WiseTLAuthor

Thanks for the compliment! To be honest sometimes I slack off and the translation isn't that good in my opinion but I try! sometimes... I used to be someone who just read 24/7 then I ran out of things to read! So I decided to take things to my own hand, so it's a win win situation! A little spoiler but I'm releasing 5 new translations tomorrow!

Big_D_Apatheem:I agree, it definetly deserves to be tried at least, the quality was good enough for that. I appreciate the work you do btw, your translations are some of the best I've ever had the pleasure of reading. Where do you even find the energy to do this much work tho😂
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Big_D_Apatheem
Big_D_ApatheemLv13

I'll have my powerstones ready then, but please dont overwork yourself🙏 passion is always strongest at the start, but you need a healthy schedule to keep doing smth long time

WiseTL:Thanks for the compliment! To be honest sometimes I slack off and the translation isn't that good in my opinion but I try! sometimes... I used to be someone who just read 24/7 then I ran out of things to read! So I decided to take things to my own hand, so it's a win win situation! A little spoiler but I'm releasing 5 new translations tomorrow!
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WiseTL
WiseTLAuthor

Thanks! I don't really need power stones thats just there for so people can read more! I don't even know what they do :p

Big_D_Apatheem:I'll have my powerstones ready then, but please dont overwork yourself🙏 passion is always strongest at the start, but you need a healthy schedule to keep doing smth long time
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Big_D_Apatheem
Big_D_ApatheemLv13

There is a powerstone ranking, which most ppl look at if they're searching for new novels or ffs to read. If you get lots of powerstones, your fic goes up the ranks, which brings in more ppl. The longer and more this happens, the more of a dedicated audience you will have, which could possibly support an original novel lf your in the future, which could get you money.

WiseTL:Thanks! I don't really need power stones thats just there for so people can read more! I don't even know what they do :p
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WiseTL
WiseTLAuthor

Oooh! Thanks for the info!

Big_D_Apatheem:There is a powerstone ranking, which most ppl look at if they're searching for new novels or ffs to read. If you get lots of powerstones, your fic goes up the ranks, which brings in more ppl. The longer and more this happens, the more of a dedicated audience you will have, which could possibly support an original novel lf your in the future, which could get you money.
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