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2024-12-27 01:22

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Haikyuu is my favourite sports anime. So, this fanfiction is a treat for me. First of all, Author, you are a genius in storytelling and writing. The best thing in this fanfic is all the character interactions which are extremely good. But I am just disappointed in one thing and that is the mc being too op. The best thing about haikyuu is its realistic approach. Whenever, I watch a match in haikyuu my blood pumps rapidly and my heartbeat increases due to the anticipation of what would happen next. I get goosebumps during those matches. But if the mc is too strong then it takes away all these emotions and the story becomes boring. Although I am not a fan of nerfing op characters for the plot, but I understand that it's important for character development and story. Honestly, you could have placed mc in different team like with oikawa who can utilize the talent of mc very well. Moreover, having mc with hinata and kageyama is like having ushiwaka with the freak duos in karasuno. I mean who can defeat them and it takes away all those tension and thrilling moments because I know that they will be unbeatable. You could have given mc more aptitude and potential enough to surpass ushiwaka and sakusa. However, for some reasons, he couldn't utilize all of his potential and so by staying with the freak duos he finds the inspiration to achieve his full potential and the drive to achieve greatness (I know I am just yapping and spouting unnecessary nonsense but I really like your fanfiction so please don't mind). And last but not the least, please don't make him an all rounder as he has all the qualities of being an absolute ace and it will take away the purpose of hinata being part of the team as he has a disadvantage that he can only overcome by learning everything, especially now since he won’t have much opportunity to score because of the main character. Haikyuu is all about teamwork so please give other characters some chance to shine and have mc save them in pinch which will be more meaningful for me. Note : Sorry for stretching it too much 🙏🙏

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