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AnthonySanders
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2024-10-16 19:52

This is a very well put together story. It jumps right into the action and keeps its pace. It also hold perspective and concept very well. I do wish there was more detail, because I like getting a view of what's happening. But this takes nothing away from the great quality story we have here.

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Krystal_George123
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Thanks a lot. I wonder if you can expatiate more on what you mean by more detail, I would work on that immediately.

AnthonySanders
AnthonySandersLv2

The world is described quit nice and a lot of people will enjoy. But only being able to see a few colors in life I have a tendency to gravitate to books that kind of lay it out.

Krystal_George123:Thanks a lot. I wonder if you can expatiate more on what you mean by more detail, I would work on that immediately.
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