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Anakin_LostLv153mth
2025-01-01 02:33

the premise and characters are nice but the grammar and spelling mistakes are so frequent it is crazy how this ended up as the freebie today. author, this one just isn't for me because even by WN standards this is just too broken but I don't want you to think I'm just trashing it. The romance scenes were well done and i liked how you structured his awakening while still leaving some mystery. With a good editor or grammarly, I could see this book on Amazon tomorrow.

Welcome to the Innocent World

Rin_Hearts
4.4
246 Chs

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Rin_Hearts
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Hello Readers 🩷 So here is the review of my own Novel. -MC is loved by everyone and is overpowered.  -There will be lots of very steamy scenes. -MC has 7 girls in his Shadow Mystics. All of them are very hot and strong. -MC will be doing the stealing from time to time, and no, he won't be cucked. Why should you read? -It's fun, humor-filled,  and coincidentally weird at times, and the action scenes are crafted with lots of thought, and a few of the arcs will be emotional as well. Does it deserve 5 stars? -Yes. Read! You will know

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Discarded
DiscardedLv4

you need to clarify what "open NTR" means. if it willingly netori, that would be fine. if it willingly netorare, that would be awful for me. i'll give you neutral 3 star for now

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Ahegao_Immortal
Ahegao_ImmortalLv4

So far so good, will continue reading, recomend 👍 dont worry guys no netorare. .

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Meow_User
Meow_UserLv2

The start of the story and the sorority house arc hooked me up...Imma read it and see how it goes further. Loved that neighbour aunty as well..sensing some steamy scenes with her ahead...Keep it up!!!!

4mth
Emilia_88
Emilia_88Lv1

Loll..Story reminds me of of Eminence in the shadow but damn adult version of it. Great work..especially the arc of Athlea Loved it so far 🩷🩷

4mth
Jack_4352
Jack_4352Lv15

haven't read it yet but was wondering if there was any Yuri or inc*st?

5mth
Naacht
NaachtLv15

Great book overall but there's gender bender and yuri stuff later in the story so be advised cause i just found out

3mth
tango1669
tango1669Lv1

HAREM!! HAREM!! HAREM!! HAREM!! HAREM!! And the best part is that they all are either college girls or married women 🩷 The plot is well defined as well

5mth
Bilal_shaikh_10
Bilal_shaikh_10Lv2

Nice blend of an interesting story and saucy moments. And Yes the MC is cool asf in action scenes 🖤

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