A fanfic with minimal system focus thus far and a good grasp on comedy between the MC and other characters. i quite enjoy it so far.

Ngl bro, this fanfic kinda fell off on the later chapters. The starting was really good with his and aura's relationship and him being a demon and all, but then this quickly turned into a self insert of an OC character in the original plotline. It's not like the story is bad or nothing, but the story is progressing exactly like the original plotline and it's honestly kinda boring. I thought him being a demon would a big plot point but nah, MC learned how to hide his features and quickly blended in with humans. All in all, this fanfic is fine if you want to read a OP self insert character in the original plotline with minimal changes to the story. P.s. It hasn't been revealed to the point I have read but with MC being a father figure to Fern, it's lowkey weird how author is pushing something between them.

Hello could you send the link of the raw chinese novel of this fanfic, thanks!!! ......................................................................

This is peak, author understood how demons work in Frieren world, and does a great job at showing how MC is different. Progression seems pretty good for now.

it is a good story.....is it a transaction or something like that ??? or is this an original work from the author??? Can I get the source name please !???

jus here to give stars..................

It’s good. The story is funny and entertaining, there doesn’t seem to be any romance whitch is a shame considering all the female characters he has met throughout his life. It’s lighthearted and follows the story for the most part. The only 2 complains I have is that the system is complete dogshit, it’s weak, it’s not omnipotent or at least powerful enough to not get affected by outside powers, it has honestly done nothing the entire story other let mc meet frieren 500 years back in Time and make him a lot weaker then he should be, had he not used it he would have had about 950 years more years to train so if you’re are looking for a broken mc then this isn’t it. Still like 3-4 people that can beat him if we ignore old demons nobody knows about. The other complain is how unchanging the mc is, 90 years he has lived and in those 90 years he hasn’t changed.

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That story has good content, but it also has a 'belly kink', I did not find it funny the first time nor the other times, also every time its brought up you can tell after a while that there won't be any advancement on the main content. Nobody like fillers and you make them even less interesting by either having Ash acting like a fool (letting himself bullied) and/or having him being full on with 'belly patting kink' with young girls. What's the point of publishing three chapters a day when two of them is similar filler/weird (kinkish) content than 2/3 of the one you wrote every other days of the week.