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Potaatoo
PotaatooAuthor6mth
2024-10-24 22:10

Obligatory 5 Star Review. Message to all the potential readers: 1) The start will be slow to medium paced and I do not wish to dump information about the world in the first few chapters, so I'll be taking it slow and steady while giving small bits of information as time goes on. For those who are adamant on knowing everything about the world, I'll make an auxiliary chapter for you guys in a few days. 2) Feel free to let me know what you think in the comments or reviews. I'll wholeheartedly consider all the constructive ones but all of us know about the few dummies who can't differentiate between constructive criticism and personal wants. I'll be ignoring the toxic comments for my mental well being. #) Lastly, to those who end up liking what I write, thank you for reading and all the support.

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Luffy_1120
Luffy_1120Lv4

i like the concept where mc gives systems to other, after this comment I will give it a read, I just hope it will be another great collection for reading 😁😁

Potaatoo
PotaatooAuthor

hope you'll like it

Luffy_1120:i like the concept where mc gives systems to other, after this comment I will give it a read, I just hope it will be another great collection for reading 😁😁
Dretno
DretnoLv3

Harem or nah? plz no harem 🙏🙏

Potaatoo
PotaatooAuthor

as of now, no harem. It's so hard to decide between the to if I'm being honest. I think I'll just leave it to you readers to decide.

Dretno:Harem or nah? plz no harem 🙏🙏
Dretno
DretnoLv3

No harem plz, there are far too many good stories ruined by harem. If you don't include harem then this story will surely stand out as a gem among the rest .

Potaatoo:as of now, no harem. It's so hard to decide between the to if I'm being honest. I think I'll just leave it to you readers to decide.
Potaatoo
PotaatooAuthor

mhm I'll see how things go. thanks for your opinion

Dretno:No harem plz, there are far too many good stories ruined by harem. If you don't include harem then this story will surely stand out as a gem among the rest .
Anitimesc
AnitimescLv15

Will Clara and Amelia be the MC wives? I Hope so

Potaatoo
PotaatooAuthor

which chapter you at?

Anitimesc:Will Clara and Amelia be the MC wives? I Hope so
dsss_ddd
dsss_dddLv3

Harem? I like harems. I'm not asking too much. Four or five members.

Potaatoo
PotaatooAuthor

yes

dsss_ddd:Harem? I like harems. I'm not asking too much. Four or five members.
Abinav_KR
Abinav_KRLv4

no harem please. It's like this in every good novel I read. It is really hard to get to read many good stories with strong mc who doesn't have a single girl who he will be fully committed to. Most of the times when they are deep in their relation someone will barge in to be his girl. The original girl will somehow accept this they will become sisters who want the same man. Like man I don't know what is up with those girls. Is it because polygamy is more open in mideval or fantasy world?? Most of the time I can't even understand how the first girl even stayed loyal to him till the end the boy was not loyal at all. No matter how much big his reason it was most worst thing He could do to that girl. At the end as if she had a shock circuit , she would say " I understand. Don't worry I'm happy as long I could stay with you .........etc. Man if you are going to add harem don't do it just to add number. But if you did add harem please don't add a love at first sight, he looks so handsome, he is so strong ....... etc troupes. But I still strongly lean for a no harem because it just feels right[img=recommend].

dsss_ddd:Harem? I like harems. I'm not asking too much. Four or five members.
dsss_ddd
dsss_dddLv3

Don't worry even though it will be 4 or 5 girls because writing about one girl is boring, so I plan to write a harem, but it will happen over 1000 chapters or more, so there will be no such thing as love at first sight, each girl will have character development, logical feelings and enough time, maybe 100 or 150 chapters for one girl to reach the point of love, so don't worry, a harem is logical in the Middle Ages, most nobles and kings had it was common to marry more than one girl, so don't worry.

Abinav_KR:no harem please. It's like this in every good novel I read. It is really hard to get to read many good stories with strong mc who doesn't have a single girl who he will be fully committed to. Most of the times when they are deep in their relation someone will barge in to be his girl. The original girl will somehow accept this they will become sisters who want the same man. Like man I don't know what is up with those girls. Is it because polygamy is more open in mideval or fantasy world?? Most of the time I can't even understand how the first girl even stayed loyal to him till the end the boy was not loyal at all. No matter how much big his reason it was most worst thing He could do to that girl. At the end as if she had a shock circuit , she would say " I understand. Don't worry I'm happy as long I could stay with you .........etc. Man if you are going to add harem don't do it just to add number. But if you did add harem please don't add a love at first sight, he looks so handsome, he is so strong ....... etc troupes. But I still strongly lean for a no harem because it just feels right[img=recommend].
Ash_Louis_5090
Ash_Louis_5090Lv3

I was going to start reading this novel and I will definitely read it . my suggestion would be if there are too many likeable female leads just make it harem but don't make it too large that's all I gotta say

Potaatoo:as of now, no harem. It's so hard to decide between the to if I'm being honest. I think I'll just leave it to you readers to decide.
Potaatoo
PotaatooAuthor

Never planned on something too big. max 3 or 4 but even that is a question. Currently, i'm fixated on 2 and I'll change it to harem once he gets his second girl

Ash_Louis_5090:I was going to start reading this novel and I will definitely read it . my suggestion would be if there are too many likeable female leads just make it harem but don't make it too large that's all I gotta say
Tanuki36
Tanuki36Lv4

if you're planning on writing a harem, put the tag on your book. it saves time to people that are not willing to read about polygamy (myself included).

Potaatoo:Never planned on something too big. max 3 or 4 but even that is a question. Currently, i'm fixated on 2 and I'll change it to harem once he gets his second girl
Ash_Louis_5090
Ash_Louis_5090Lv3

if you are thinking of 3-4 . add a goddess too 👀😗

Potaatoo:Never planned on something too big. max 3 or 4 but even that is a question. Currently, i'm fixated on 2 and I'll change it to harem once he gets his second girl
Jon_Lol
Jon_LolLv2

well you could keep it limited to 2 people, like havening clara and amelia as his wives because clara cares for her and would accept her into the harem but nobody else cause they are "strangers" but if you do this please do not go beyond 2 or at max 3 wives cause it wouldn't suit his personality.

Potaatoo:as of now, no harem. It's so hard to decide between the to if I'm being honest. I think I'll just leave it to you readers to decide.
Potaatoo
PotaatooAuthor

yeah it wouldn't suit his personality

Jon_Lol:well you could keep it limited to 2 people, like havening clara and amelia as his wives because clara cares for her and would accept her into the harem but nobody else cause they are "strangers" but if you do this please do not go beyond 2 or at max 3 wives cause it wouldn't suit his personality.
janefirst86419
janefirst86419Lv3

hey author, I want to who is paying him the taxes , I read up to 50 chapters and I didn't find it mention, I mean what the users who are getting the systems paying? and what happened to those systems that he got back after the users quest were done? and can he give anyone death penalty like you did with that aria girl ? and if yes for this then can he give system to anyone? if it's involves spoiler then just mention it in general

Potaatoo
PotaatooAuthor

tax is the awakened abilities that he took from those people. And yes, he can give systems to anyone but there are a few exceptions. as for the death penalty, he can do it with anyone but why should he? like, in his mind he simply wants to make use of those people. why would he kill them if he can get taxes every month? it's basically a loss hope this answered your questions

janefirst86419:hey author, I want to who is paying him the taxes , I read up to 50 chapters and I didn't find it mention, I mean what the users who are getting the systems paying? and what happened to those systems that he got back after the users quest were done? and can he give anyone death penalty like you did with that aria girl ? and if yes for this then can he give system to anyone? if it's involves spoiler then just mention it in general
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