Pretty nice story, was a little afraid of the Chinese elements in the beginning with words such as "Elemental nations", but luckily my worries were for nought. I do wonder how he's gonna explain getting his stuff, or if anyone is ever gonna ask questions about it, but that's a question for another day. Give it a try, it feels a bit like other Internet cafe stories, but with better games and not an overconvoluted explanation of the games
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but the eemental nations is what they’re called in canon. Land of Fire/Fire Country, its just the villages that have different names ergo Hidden Leaf/Stone etc.
I'm not so sure about that being canon, as far as I'm aware, it's called the Shinobi world (I am quite sure madara and a few other characters called it the Shinobi world). calling the world, elemental nations is a weird phenomenon that only really happens in fanfics (mostly chinese, but not exlusive to those works), the correct way would be to just to say the nations of the shinobi world, and forego the element part, unless specifically talked about. imagine if the whole world was scandinavia, and you lived in Norway, then imagine saying "He suddenly woke up in the Scandinavian nations inside Norway" that's kinda weird isn't it?
