So far it's been quite fun for me. I didn't like one chapter where all the words were in bold, but I can forgive that. As for the story, I really don't know anything about Swallowed Star. However, the explanations have been enough to give me a general idea. Take a look, maybe you'll like it too
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LIKEIt do be like that, I've seen this happening in many fics this past few months, and always wondered why the authors never fixed it. Turns out this was the reason.
Can you change the name in the immortal stage because undying is not very suitable because of the higher level
You have no idea how much I wanted to change that, among other things. The terms that Swallowed Star Wiki uses are much better. But in the official translation, it is translated as Undying.