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2024-10-07 22:35

Author giving my shameless five star review here! Seriously though if you like my content please leave a review to drown out the haters and give me your stones. There will always be haters and trolls who don't give accurate reviews. Also please be kind, I love my work and while I try not to I do take comments personally.

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Sabine_Bailey
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Thank you author-San for your novel!

Mighty_dragon
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Finaly an author who know about comics lore and not just follow the mcu, i will support you just based on that. So Based on your synopsis, Okkara will not be split into two islands; Apocalypse and Genesis will not be separated, and the mutants will finally have their own nation and empire, similar to the Krakoa era.

Fat_Immortal
Fat_ImmortalAuthor

Thank you. Besides Sabine someone I know you are my first commenter for the first book I have written! All my firsts lol not in a weird way. But seriously, Okkara will be split temporarily but not for too long since we want Arrako and Krakoa to rejoin which they couldn't in the comics due to their long separation. Apocalypse will lose his wife and most of his people (temporarily) who leave for Amenth to block the demonic horde due to his lack of power when Amenth invades Okkara. Then we have a training arc where Apocalypse powers up followed by the rescue. It will be an epic scene of violence where Apocalypse mans up and breaks through the dimensional barrier of Amenth and saves his wife from the Demon Hordes of Amenth by slaying the Elder God Annihilation. Look forward to it because I will!!!

Mighty_dragon:Finaly an author who know about comics lore and not just follow the mcu, i will support you just based on that. So Based on your synopsis, Okkara will not be split into two islands; Apocalypse and Genesis will not be separated, and the mutants will finally have their own nation and empire, similar to the Krakoa era.
Fat_Immortal
Fat_ImmortalAuthor

Also yes the mutants will finally have their own nation and empire called the Imperium of Okkara (yes some there are some Warhammer 40k vibes), similar to the Krakoa era. That's where the kingdom building tag I put there comes into play. He won't arrive on Okkara until chapter 50 though, I don't want to rush Apocalypse's early life and character building.

Mighty_dragon:Finaly an author who know about comics lore and not just follow the mcu, i will support you just based on that. So Based on your synopsis, Okkara will not be split into two islands; Apocalypse and Genesis will not be separated, and the mutants will finally have their own nation and empire, similar to the Krakoa era.
millerissy2801
millerissy2801Lv1

I can’t wait to read all of it. Great work

Fat_Immortal:Thank you. Besides Sabine someone I know you are my first commenter for the first book I have written! All my firsts lol not in a weird way. But seriously, Okkara will be split temporarily but not for too long since we want Arrako and Krakoa to rejoin which they couldn't in the comics due to their long separation. Apocalypse will lose his wife and most of his people (temporarily) who leave for Amenth to block the demonic horde due to his lack of power when Amenth invades Okkara. Then we have a training arc where Apocalypse powers up followed by the rescue. It will be an epic scene of violence where Apocalypse mans up and breaks through the dimensional barrier of Amenth and saves his wife from the Demon Hordes of Amenth by slaying the Elder God Annihilation. Look forward to it because I will!!!
Mighty_dragon
Mighty_dragonLv5

That sound very awesome author, i can't wait to read it. nice work

Fat_Immortal:Also yes the mutants will finally have their own nation and empire called the Imperium of Okkara (yes some there are some Warhammer 40k vibes), similar to the Krakoa era. That's where the kingdom building tag I put there comes into play. He won't arrive on Okkara until chapter 50 though, I don't want to rush Apocalypse's early life and character building.
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