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LouLou2
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2024-10-07 12:30

Author being shamless with a self-review: tick For any readers this is my first novel so please forgive sporadic uploading whilst I fine tune everything and do my best to make this is fun as possible! Along those lines, tips and suggestions are so welcome to me, be honest, I can take it. On a final note, I added a comment at the end of Ch 1. for this but I'm going to randomly include the odd song recommendation here and there, so if you like, keep an eye on that and then try to go back and read the chapter with the song playing. Let me know what you think of that as it's something I'd like to test for a larger project. Happy reading all!

To Love A River

LouLou2
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135 Chs

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Hanaka1234
Hanaka1234Lv12

You need to add more to this, doesn't fully explain how awesome your novel is, anyone dubious, just stick with it till midway, it goes HARD. Doing an awesome job Author! I'm on my second reread :'D

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LouLou2
LouLou2Author

Aw thank you! So glad you like it :D

Hanaka1234:You need to add more to this, doesn't fully explain how awesome your novel is, anyone dubious, just stick with it till midway, it goes HARD. Doing an awesome job Author! I'm on my second reread :'D
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OpenEnd
OpenEndLv2

LouLou, you are an amazing writer, and I am inspired by your work! I'm still very new at this but have incredible stories in my head that I believe are unique and relatable. That said, I have an idea for a story that I'm not entirely sure I can do on my own with my skill level in writing. I would be so appreciative if you'd join me in developing it into something great. It's a fantasy romance with a dangerous twist, incorporating multidimensional travel, magical abilities (though the protagonist lacks any), multiple female support characters, impossible enemies, a strong FL protagonist that overcomes the odds for love, etc. If you're interested, please don't hesitate to add me on Facebook and DM me to get more info. Thanks. fb: Open End

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LouLou2
LouLou2Author

Oh that's so sweet of you! Honestly the first volume of this is a little rough around the edges being my first try 😅 practice helps! Every new thing you write will get better and better and yours is already awesome too :) I would love to help but I may not be able to for a while. I'm currently working full time whilst under contract with this one that needs 1,500 words a day, so I don't really have the capacity for another project just yet. I'll add you on FB though for sure 😊❤️

OpenEnd:LouLou, you are an amazing writer, and I am inspired by your work! I'm still very new at this but have incredible stories in my head that I believe are unique and relatable. That said, I have an idea for a story that I'm not entirely sure I can do on my own with my skill level in writing. I would be so appreciative if you'd join me in developing it into something great. It's a fantasy romance with a dangerous twist, incorporating multidimensional travel, magical abilities (though the protagonist lacks any), multiple female support characters, impossible enemies, a strong FL protagonist that overcomes the odds for love, etc. If you're interested, please don't hesitate to add me on Facebook and DM me to get more info. Thanks. fb: Open End
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Hanaka1234
Hanaka1234Lv12

I downloaded the app just to carry on reading this one. It's very well written, also I am soooooo into the characters already. I love Ezra, I love Love, I love that even the side characters get cool names and actual motivations behind why they act the way they do. The music recommendations are so cool and genuinely add to the story, I made a proper account to read the later chapters and Author was right, the story goes HARD and get's so good after the midway point when they go out into the Wastelands, Ezra's sidestory chapters could be a whole novel on their own, they're amazing. Keep going girl!! I'm excited and nervous about what's gonna happen next, hope you keep going with this because I HAVE to know who Love's parents are, when Ezra gets revenge, what's going on with the missing vamp kids and the whole thing with Kit and Till! Gaaaaaah, alright rant over, in summary please give this novel a real chance and read at least until the Wastelands chapters they're awesome (and spicy)

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Starlight_2001
Starlight_2001Lv12

Ok, wow, just wow. I think the Author started slow as some kind of devious trick because I was NOT READY for the turning points. The moments of smooth intriguing dialogue completely disarm you for when shit gets real (ahem, A Locked Door, ahem). This is amazing writing, everything is being foreshadowed and my god I love the characters. Love, Ezra, Till, just so perfectly written...hell even Ren, you hot psycho you. Conclusion! Stick. With. This. Book. You won't be disappointed

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OpenEnd
OpenEndLv2

I don't know if it's weird, but I think that I might love Love. All jokes aside, To Love A River is does great with capturing the reader's attention from the very beginning. I'm a fan of great hooks. And I'm a fan of Love.

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Miss_Mayy
Miss_MayyLv2

When I say read it .I mean it🤭. The setting, the characters. Gosh this is a pass🌹

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Debiddo_Atisuto
Debiddo_AtisutoLv2

Impeccable writing style. The author's ability to capture the true essence of worldbuilding is astounding. If there's anyone on the contrary, they need literary adjustment. And you can tell them I said it. I'm inspired as a fellow writer.

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kkm14147
kkm14147Lv4

World building is good. I don't know why your views are like this. Female lead's characters development is good but Ezra is also good. I like that vampires are not too overpowered like many stories. Sometimes characters would make you uncomfortable and angry but that's how they are.

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Zoro_9396
Zoro_9396Lv2

This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it 👍👍

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Ohritro
OhritroLv1

Your work is excellent. I love the characters, the plot, and your writing style. I would definitely read this novel frequently, and it's great that there are many chapters and that I can take my time to enjoy this piece. :3

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