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OmerKhalid
OmerKhalidLv144mth
2024-11-11 05:34

Hmm... The premises seems to be promising just that it's a bit rushed.

Endless Spear

synekdoche
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Le_Roy_Noval
Le_Roy_NovalLv14

a very nice and interesting plot of the story

4mth

gigachad0a00
gigachad0a00Lv1

hmm. it's quite fast and a lot of things are rushed. like the concept of the novel but is it not being justice.

4mth
Alx18
Alx18Lv4

Se ve que es una buena historia espero que no me equivoque.

4mth
Nelci_Gabrina
Nelci_GabrinaLv3

review for FP....the Poster seems interesting tho....nice choice !!

4mth
Yalwatee_
Yalwatee_Lv3

I'm here for a FP, 😍 but I'll consider your book later.

4mth
Ravi_0822
Ravi_0822Lv4

review for event fp don't mind it lllllllll

4mth
synekdoche
synekdocheAuthor

Can't wait to expand more on the world and universe, the characters and power systems. kind of rushed it in the beginning but there's so much more planned.

5mth
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