The writing is alright though it suffers at certain moments. In terms of the story, i feel like the affect that the MC has on the other characters especially first with Erina was kinda quick. The story just started already at Tootsuki and suddenly he caught the attention of the MC despite his cooking being considered low even by the system itself. The assesment of the system and the different affect it had on Erina was also mindboggling as I question if the System was correct. It would have been overall more effective if the System had rated it amazing despite its weird and strange way of preparation and look thus showcasing that it has points in its taste. If that was your plan then it clearly wasn't written in that way. Again, i feel like the whole situation with the MC and Erina just feels too forced at times in a way due to how quick it happened. I mean, it did happen to Soma in Canon but atleast his dish was actually tasty and Erina was just in complete denial because of her personality. Heck, he suddenly somehow finds himself on where she lives and asks to stay. Overall, the story is pretty average. The MC isn't really that interesting as a character regardless of the system and overall feels kinda now knowledgeable of everything. The Plot isn't that new, unique or really isn't that different to other stories of this fanon.

The story is real good, continue the work author. Great Job at this one.

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The storyline is good so far, the comedy and dregs system makes the MC look stupid but funny (positive) maybe add a little romance spice # 😘

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my mind has changed about this Updates are pretty regular uploaded i Think the writing is good for a webnovel fanfic the world background is more or less a 4-5 star as the creator covers more and more of the world as our mc makes progress the on thing i have to say about this fanfic is that the author knows how to apply Good pacing to a good story i like it but not love it from 3 stars to 4👍

Pretty Decent writing Some errors but overall i think its alright Mc and Erinas relationship is 100% forced and the mc himself doesnt really even seem memorable

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its cool, it updates at a decently consistent pace and the moments in the later half are much better compared to the earlier half. I hope it ends up as a harem.