man this story has potential, i like how it is going, the mc is too much hard working to reach his max strength because he knows the world and there is a system assigning him yearly quests to make sure he doesnt get stuck, but its too much AI written with low editing. so so many times same things are repeated again, whole chapters repeated with slight change, could be because of prompt changes. i believe with 1 level of editing (10 mins per chapter), this story can reach at least 80% of its potential, author has good ideas which he is able to put on paper with help of AI but AI has its limits. ill ask everyone to give it a try if only because of how much author is able to churn out in past week. in 1 week of writing, mc has reached age 8 almost chunin

An excellent story. The main character is interesting. The setting and time frame are interesting, but what really sets the story apart from others is the growth. The progression is perfect not once did I think it was going too fast or slow. If I had one problem with the story, it is that it’s missing an X factor. There’s no wrench in any plans, there’s no surprises. Just sustainable marginal growth. But that’s to be expected in a safe environment like kohana with no war. But I assume that will change in the upcoming chapters. Here is five stars to keep you going.

Nice fanfic, However the ages of the characters are kinda hard to keep up with as they differ from the source material.

so far, the story is interesting, the only thing that ruins this is the writing style and how the plot and flow of the story is handled, it become too boring to read. Very poor character design, not much is explained, too plain, could do more work world background: gave 3stars cuz of Naruto background, otherwise I'll give 2stars, lack of description of place. ruins the whole mood of story

Aburrido, regular, repetitivo, muchas descripciones innecesarias, todos los capitulos te describe lo que hace el mc y sinceramente muy expansivo para mí gusto, no estoy leyendo una historia sino un manual que no se disfruta

Please finish this work I really love it and I’m desperate to read more please.😭😭😭😭🥺🥺🥺. I love it so much you are so intriguing and new and so detailed. The characters have not seen before were made and Naruto was the best. The training regiment was so detailed mysterious and magnificent. I’m honestly blown away. I read works like this but you take the cupcake. Hahaha

bad writing, overly redundant. I've read "this is just the beginning" at the end of so many chapters. XD

In my personal opinion this story is very well written far better than alot of other stories this managed to keep my adhd ahh to binge read it the system in the story barely plays a major role but it blends well in the background, i personally would recommend it

i am writing this comment after reading 130 chapters . although writing quality is good but story progresses too slow, chapters are too much repeatetive , 2 or 3 chapters contains the gist that can be completed in one paragraph , like if you read 1 or 2 paragraph in the beginning of the chapter u most likely do not need to read rest of the chapter as they contain almost the same thing and because of this its not interesting anymore. its feels like the author is forced to write the story .