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2024-12-06 04:48

As you can see by the amount of votes i was a fan of this novel unfortunately the author is dishonest about the content of the novel, he is shackled by the same cliche and disgusting incel behavior thay majority of authors on webnovel suffer. There would be absolutely no freaking problem if he said in either the tags or comments what the story would be. But he lied and made it seem like it’s a revenge story with a puppet king who takes back his rightful throne. Which didn’t happen the mc is a pathetic little twirp who feels guilty for the girls who betrayed him and wants to help and save them.

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N0N4M3_MONK
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I'm sorry you feel this way. As I've said before, this is my first story and I was bound to make a lot of mistakes with it. My original intention was to write a story that only dealt with revenge but various plot threads got in the way and it became an ungainly chimera of what I originally wanted. Due to some personal life issues, I've had to take a brief break from it but the time spent away from the story has given me some clarity, and I'm sure you'll be pleased to know that I've decided to place this one on the shelf and will not continue writing it. I will post the remaining chapters that are already written as I edit them, but after that, I've decided to stop with this until I have a better grasp on storytelling so that I can fulfil my objectives with a new story under a new account so I can put this one behind me. Sorry you feel betrayed, but as I've said before, I can only try my best. Hopefully the next one will be better.

JayModii
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Chin up bro... I hope this did not discourage you in any way. Remember, people have different tastes and idea of "plot progression," what one person might consider as blight another may see as bliss. So I honestly urge you to keep writing (unless you have already been denied a contract.) And when you do apply for one, I suggest you only do so once you known the direction of your story. Honestly! Don't give up! your writing has a lot of potential! Do not he dismayed!

N0N4M3_MONK:I'm sorry you feel this way. As I've said before, this is my first story and I was bound to make a lot of mistakes with it. My original intention was to write a story that only dealt with revenge but various plot threads got in the way and it became an ungainly chimera of what I originally wanted. Due to some personal life issues, I've had to take a brief break from it but the time spent away from the story has given me some clarity, and I'm sure you'll be pleased to know that I've decided to place this one on the shelf and will not continue writing it. I will post the remaining chapters that are already written as I edit them, but after that, I've decided to stop with this until I have a better grasp on storytelling so that I can fulfil my objectives with a new story under a new account so I can put this one behind me. Sorry you feel betrayed, but as I've said before, I can only try my best. Hopefully the next one will be better.
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N0N4M3_MONK:I'm sorry you feel this way. As I've said before, this is my first story and I was bound to make a lot of mistakes with it. My original intention was to write a story that only dealt with revenge but various plot threads got in the way and it became an ungainly chimera of what I originally wanted. Due to some personal life issues, I've had to take a brief break from it but the time spent away from the story has given me some clarity, and I'm sure you'll be pleased to know that I've decided to place this one on the shelf and will not continue writing it. I will post the remaining chapters that are already written as I edit them, but after that, I've decided to stop with this until I have a better grasp on storytelling so that I can fulfil my objectives with a new story under a new account so I can put this one behind me. Sorry you feel betrayed, but as I've said before, I can only try my best. Hopefully the next one will be better.
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