Overall a great story, it might be dropped. Hard to tell it’s only been a month. I’ve seen things dropped for a year get picked back up so it is hard to tell. Regardless the writing quality is good. The story is fairly fast paced but it gets the message across. While I admit it is an unusual way of writing I find myself enjoying it. While it leaves plenty of room for one off flashbacks if the author wants or perhaps to add extra things into the story I’m the future. Adding only necessary details for the story but leaving room if the author chooses to add more. Overall I really enjoyed reading this. Yes it’s different. And I’m not exactly familiar with the genshin impact universe so o can’t exactly judge that part. Overall I enjoyed the story and that is what matters. To add to that there is very little grammar errors. Or at least I think there was only one error as far as I remember and it isn’t one that most people would catch. Minor enough to miss unless you’re really looking for it. Overall I’d rate this as potentially the third best MHA fanfic if it keeps getting updates. This is from someone who isn’t a fan of genshin impact. I honestly had to look up a few things in relation to it for my own interests. Overall good job to the author.
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