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shivam_Jha
shivam_JhaLv46mth
2024-10-20 18:34

The idea is good but story development was rushed with no caracter development. It is a wish full filment FF that could have been better. Still thanks for writing the fic.

Marvel: Reborn in 20th century India

MJ_0422
4.4
105 Chs

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MJ_0422
MJ_0422Author

Yes it's a wish fulfilment fic....but perhaps you ignored that Volume 1 and 2 are general summary of years before the actual story that is starting from volume 3.....and it was just the beginning of the story...still glad you posted a review 👍👍👍

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Raul_vaz
Raul_vazLv4

As an Indian who has read up on our history and hated the non-violence movement that divided and weakened our country I thank you for writing something every Indians fantasy keep it going i love it ❤️❤️❤️

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SilentSpace
SilentSpaceLv13

I'm not an Indian or Bharat but i loved this story . Good job writing it , though MC a bit overpowered making it a bit hard for him to have character development .

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Karma_Arc
Karma_ArcLv13

Man good to see a indian novel finally with both marvel and independence damn thats something new love it but make it a little slow pace and pls increase the word count and some dedicated chapters on character development not to say much love it keep it up Full support [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]

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Daoist20dWjD
Daoist20dWjDLv4

please continue I want to see the Bharat ya Empire

6mth
LUFFY3D2Y
LUFFY3D2YLv14

really love the fanfic hope it receives great support

7mth
Toriqul
ToriqulLv4

Not bad. Writer likes to repeat himself which should be minimized. Reduce the family time, and focusing more on empire building and introducing new technology at a reasonable pace would make the story just perfect.

6mth
MJ_0422
MJ_0422Author

I didn't wanted to post this review but I was forced to ............... ............... All I want to say is I am completely new author, so yeah if anyone wants to try out taking this idea and write a better story out of it I am fine with it......also I am writing this story as a timepass, so I don't really have a problem to drop this. ............... ............... Take care 🙏🙏

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DaoistH0qkyJ
DaoistH0qkyJLv4

Story is great but dialogue and narration is somewhat poor.. every other line starts with sentences like 'with deep responsibility' or else..it seems redundant

6mth
_Human_
_Human_Lv4

I hope you continue to write the story 👍

6mth
Dhiraj_Ghode
Dhiraj_GhodeLv3

nic Indian fanfiction story... . . . . .

6mth
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