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2024-11-10 21:31

IT was really good until the Point where you got us into the water Story Just write Like a short chapter or something Like that that would have even cool other than that ther IS only the system write IT maybe in Like [ hi i am the system ] in this Kind of stuff but IT a pretty good Story until now

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BLACKangelmarlAuthor

Thanks for the review. Don't worry, I am doing it in my latest chapter right now, in chapter 40.

ISHAN_MISRALv4

is it like shepherding humanity, really liked the idea but it had some plot holes

BLACKangelmarl:Thanks for the review. Don't worry, I am doing it in my latest chapter right now, in chapter 40.
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