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2024-10-24 08:38

This book is a GREAT Food wars fanfic, the settings are great, the crossovers are great, and the food wars aspect itself is one of the best in Webnovel. There’s just one thing that I hate in this book. The MC is a bastard. Sure, it might be hypocritical of me to hate those kind of MC since I like the harem genre. But, just reading how the MC is havin an affair with two other girls and the last one is literally by r@p3? In my opinion, the romance aspect in this book is good. Very even, but the progression is sometimes forced and similar to those Chinese novel where it’s MC can’t keep his weiner in check and pretty much turns into a gigolo while stil saying “I cant leave (main girl) since I love her. But I still love you”. Hate those kind of romance tbh. I rather have brainrot kind of harem then this. Overall: GREAT STORY if you’re searching for Food Wars fanfic. But don’t expect much on the romance part. It’s all my opinion, if you disagree then it’s fine. Thank you

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ain't his bathroom door leading to any other world than food wars??

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