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2024-10-26 23:33

Aight my first Review in ages... Welp welp author san! I like this, and by that i mean that i like how dis story is goin... The concept is cool, writing quality is actually better than what mostly I've seen online... Although yea i saw some grammar errors but ik ur a human too (correct em bish.. jk) The dialogues seem authentic too! Although yea I'd like to point this out that the chaps... Are like a bit overwhelming to me.. maybe because I'm a slow pace reader but yeah it was actually a bit too much for me... Like the title distribution and the authority, they were nicely done and all but i saw some rushing there... But yea if i put that aside, i can smell a good OP story here... So, gimme more chaps bish :v kek... [img=Feeling it]

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