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Mamameste
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2024-10-09 11:09

Follow Luffy on his adventure, without haki and an unreliable system and to add it seems written with artificial intelligence [img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry]

One piece : Card of Destiny

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Lizrock
LizrockLv4

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Yuri_yuri
Yuri_yuriLv4

The idea is the same as in other stories and with several clichés: "a mysterious Impel Down prisoner in the last level who is part of an ancient race and is a "D". Also, I don't like the system, it's pretty horrible. Plus it's written in a horrible way. (Google traductor)

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tris_krits
tris_kritsLv1

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SleepySmile
SleepySmileLv14

Pretty cool but most of the character aren't like their anime counterpart they don't feel the same

5mth
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