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DaoistYwhOBG
DaoistYwhOBGLv46mth
2024-10-25 02:19

The writing is good, there’s only some minor spelling and grammar mistakes. I would like some images to what things look like. But other than that, it’s good.

King of Shikigami

a_laughing_Batman
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a_laughing_Batman
a_laughing_BatmanAuthor

Thank you for the review ☺️☺️ Please do mention wherever you find the above mentioned mistakes.

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a_laughing_Batman
a_laughing_BatmanAuthor

Shameless author here asking for genuine reviews🙇. Please go easy on me. 🥺 It's my first time writing on any platform. Any form of constructive criticism is welcomed🙏

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Victor_7740
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Good so far but one of my pet peeves is that the dialouge isn’t as clear cut as it should be. U should seperate a conversation with fhe paragraphs to make it more readable, and we know that’s it’s a conversation we’re reading

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jan_Zaib
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Loved it so far. I have some questions about the story and plot it will take 1. Will it be haram story? 2. How strong will u make the MC please update i love ten shadows CT so much and Megumi Fushihguro was not utilizing it the right way I hope that u can get our MC to use it the way it was supposed to be used . English is not my main language so hopefully if this comment can't get to you I don't know what will .Good luck and keep updating ..

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