The fighting scenes are so well explained it was surreal, I like how he explained the expression the way he stabed and his system is well defined including penalties. the world building is also good it was good read for me I hope author dwell more on character building and continue it..

This is a Good Story with potential to be among the top fantasy ones. I have to say that originally i came to just test some chapters but now I am hooked . Waiting for the next chapters ...... And his ability to mimic .... can't he copy the skills of the so-called divine one who reincarnated him?. Looking forward to new chapters . I hope you will succeed in your writing .

Damn! That was fun! You should really update more often. Its not every day I get to enjoy a dark fantasy litrpg so much! Great work author. keep going!

This is a beautifully crafted novel, and its uniqueness is beyond imagination. While I'm not usually a fan of first-person writing, this book has changed my perspective. I would love to read more chapters.

This is a first person immersion into a dark world directly through the MC's eyes. If you're looking to dive in and follow along, it'll grab you from the jump. The system is presented clearly without bogging down the start of the story, and I can't wait to see how the MC will use it to rise!

Grammar is on point with a tint of first person perspective. I do love how each action he takes is expressed in the skill status. Its easy to read and quite understanding for a system novel. Kudos to the author, would be expecting more.

A straightforward litRPG, but with its own mysteries and twists to keep it fresh. The story opens in medua res - the protagonist has died and already had his meeting in the after life, and we are left only guessing what happened and why. As stands, the 'curse' could be more substantial, but -10% HP may end up playing out as more annoying for the MC than one may initially expect. There are many questions: what kind of person was the MC? Why does he make some morally questionable choices so easily? Do others in this world have curses or even blessings? There is much to answer, explore, and build with this story. If you're interested in a story that starts similarly to many litRPGs but carries with it the promise of intrigue and twists, including that of the protagonist themselves, this is worth checking out.

the writing and description overall is good though I feel the story a little empty honestly. it would have been better if there was an introduction about how the mc died in the first chapter, here we're directly thrown in action without context(the synopsis isn't enough it has to be in the story ) another point is that it's a system story, I expect more action, how will the mc evolve further? it feels too slow. I hope to see an improvement in these aspects , you have won a daily reader after all :D

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