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Hippo9999
Hippo9999Lv154mth
2024-12-01 21:53

Pros: Naruto Fanfic. Before the plot. Cons: The story is translated or written by an AI. The stories romance is extremely forced. The author talks about the system every chapter to enhance his word count. Words are repeated and too happy for reality. This is a world where strength, war, and blood are prevalent. Konoha isn’t the village it is in the first episode of Naruto, in the 16th year of establishment. After reading 5 chapters, I couldn’t take it anymore. My face was cringing so hard, I had second hand embarrassment. If the Author/Translator/Editor sees this, I would recommend reading over your writing and then comparing it with another author to see what you can improve. Your writing just doesn’t sound like a human wrote it.

Naruto: The Perfect Hokage

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Yanir_FP
Yanir_FPLv4

I'll be honest this is quite an interesting one because there's a system, second this is around Tsunade generation and I'm hoping she is the MC's love interest, 3 there's not many novels about an MC who wants to become hokage and sometimes they make the hokage look like a joke it's the most powerful position in the village yeah there's a lot of paperwork but you don't always have to be at the office just use Shadow clone jutsu also this gives you the opportunity to implement your own ideas or your way of thinking or influence major characters and finally I can't say much because of the little chapters there is but I'm going to wait and see if this is promising if it is I'll give another review in the future don't disappoint us creator

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Bored_NPC_22Author

Hello, Author here please do read the book😄😄

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Wizened
WizenedLv4

This is a wonderfully written piece of work and has excellent grammer and potential I like the authors writing personally. The reason this ain’t higher for me is because it seems like nothing is happening yk like everything is a skippable training arc kinda, another thing from me is that the mc is just so happy go lucky all the time it’s like dial it back just a bit he is a ninja after all. The system is 50/50 for me but I don’t mind it too much, lady tsunade isn’t a bad pairing this fanfic has made her seem a little bland sometimes. Overall it’s a great read and I see it being very well executed

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captainfatbelly
captainfatbellyLv4

good pacing good interaction overall pretty good book only downside are unstable updates

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Eduardo_Fernandes_5285Lv11

Reveal spoiler

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0ArtoriaPendragon0
0ArtoriaPendragon0Lv4

The lot and characters brought into this story is something new but also great. Watching the MC improve himself and his relationships with others including tsunade make we want to continue your stories. They brighten my day and make me looking forward to the next.

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Ayush_Pathak_6627
Ayush_Pathak_6627Lv4

its' a great story to begin with and a whole new plot as a storyline ...it makes story much more exciting keep going my friend your story truly is making its' way to top

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Austin_Hindman_9370
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Love this and the dxd story wish the author updated more

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Jeremiah_Loggains
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I am really loving the book! I just want more chapters 🤣

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