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LLagier
LLagierLv46mth
2024-10-08 15:44

The novel is really good, the only thing making it 3 stars for me are the characters and world background, you can’t really feel the characters, only the mc is thoroughly described…tho that may change later, as for the WB, the surroundings aren’t really described much, it would be really awesome if the author puts some effort into that, although i know the city Kelvin lives in is cyberpunkish it just feels like a wasteland to me without descriptions OR interactions (for example in the latest chapter i have read the mc just teleports to his house after the gate is described.). I would’ve gave the novel less stars but the writing quality really holds it up.

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DMadLord
DMadLordAuthor

Which character have I not described? Also, I skipped going through the city because I didn't think it was necessary. After all, I had described the city on at least two separate occasions.

LLagier
LLagierLv4

Aside from that ring soul and Kelvin, about no one, the knowledge we have about characters are superficial well it can be due to the novel just starting. As for WB, you literally desribed what i said, 2 times in 40 something chapters is just too little of WB. This is just my opinion and it can count as constructive criticism, hope it helps!

DMadLord:Which character have I not described? Also, I skipped going through the city because I didn't think it was necessary. After all, I had described the city on at least two separate occasions.
DMadLord
DMadLordAuthor

Those two are the main and side characters. They are the only ones that matter. I asked you to name one that I did not describe, you didn't name one. Am I to describe every single character in the book at depth? I took your suggestion about describing the city more which I did in my draft. Even though saying "2 times in 40" chapters doesn't mean anything. I will only describe things when they are relevant just like when I described the wild outside the city and the effects of the incursion. However, I took my time to describe the city again because of your critism and because the situation in the story called for it. I have to agree that you had a point on that. I could describe the city more. But I still do not get you saying I didn't describe characters and then you point out that the characters that I described are the only significant ones in the whole book. Please be specific. Name one character that you would like to know more about that I haven't described.

LLagier:Aside from that ring soul and Kelvin, about no one, the knowledge we have about characters are superficial well it can be due to the novel just starting. As for WB, you literally desribed what i said, 2 times in 40 something chapters is just too little of WB. This is just my opinion and it can count as constructive criticism, hope it helps!
LLagier
LLagierLv4

Sure, Raijin, Icon and the several important characters that are king gods (I don’t know if the title is correct.) the characters that helped Icon (the ones mentioned. by describe I don’t mean physically alone.) ? They surely are related to the story. The WB isn’t a relevancy matter it’s a necessity, we readers have to imagine the landscape and how everything happens in accordance to the world you built, but if barely anything is mentioned my comment and/or review will exist which does. Thanks for replying.

DMadLord:Those two are the main and side characters. They are the only ones that matter. I asked you to name one that I did not describe, you didn't name one. Am I to describe every single character in the book at depth? I took your suggestion about describing the city more which I did in my draft. Even though saying "2 times in 40" chapters doesn't mean anything. I will only describe things when they are relevant just like when I described the wild outside the city and the effects of the incursion. However, I took my time to describe the city again because of your critism and because the situation in the story called for it. I have to agree that you had a point on that. I could describe the city more. But I still do not get you saying I didn't describe characters and then you point out that the characters that I described are the only significant ones in the whole book. Please be specific. Name one character that you would like to know more about that I haven't described.
LLagier
LLagierLv4

No don’t Icon that was a mistake on my side.

DMadLord:Those two are the main and side characters. They are the only ones that matter. I asked you to name one that I did not describe, you didn't name one. Am I to describe every single character in the book at depth? I took your suggestion about describing the city more which I did in my draft. Even though saying "2 times in 40" chapters doesn't mean anything. I will only describe things when they are relevant just like when I described the wild outside the city and the effects of the incursion. However, I took my time to describe the city again because of your critism and because the situation in the story called for it. I have to agree that you had a point on that. I could describe the city more. But I still do not get you saying I didn't describe characters and then you point out that the characters that I described are the only significant ones in the whole book. Please be specific. Name one character that you would like to know more about that I haven't described.
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Quinlan, a simple office worker finds himself transmigrated to an extremely dangerous fantasy land as a level 1 Commoner with nothing to his name but his wits - and a unique gift that accompanied his teleportation. No one in Thalorind could have predicted that this unassuming arrival would one day rise to the top, redefining the very meaning of the term 'power'... And that he may have achieved said result by joining a criminal organization and clawing his way through its ranks. In the beginning, Quinlan was painfully weak and alone but thanks to his severe trust issues, joining a team was... hard. However, he soon noticed that a lot of people have collars around their necks in this world... People that couldn't exactly betray him. Follow Quinlan's journey as he grows in strength, amasses wealth, fights to the death, and meets lovely ladies. ... Discord: https://discord.gg/bjunEkswQ3 ... Disclaimer: I'd received a few complaints from some readers that my MC is not a real villain, and I have to agree; if you're looking for some complete psycho MC who burns random farmer villages down just for fun then don't read. The MC is a ruthless man who does evil things from time to time, but only to his enemies or those he considers to be true scum. He gains no joy from tormenting strangers. Also don't read if you want a story about buying s*x slaves and r*ping them, that doesn't happen in this novel. He will treat the women he wants to be with as if they were normal people, whether they're slaves or not.

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