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Leficioss
LeficiossLv32mth
2024-10-12 20:24

the columbina cover and no harem tag are giving me expectations , I'll be back after it reaches 20 chaps

Genshin Impact: Frostburn

Vellkhan
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49 Chs

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sixpathsofsimp
sixpathsofsimpLv4

so how's this fic ?

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AshlesSmiley
AshlesSmileyLv4

so how is it?

sixpathsofsimp:so how's this fic ?
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sixpathsofsimp
sixpathsofsimpLv4

don't know man haven't read but you tell me

AshlesSmiley:so how is it?
17d
AshlesSmiley
AshlesSmileyLv4

i kinda skimmed through the first couple chapters and mc wasn't really to my likings, although ill probably read it seriously some other time after more chapters. its really not the type that we read casually

sixpathsofsimp:don't know man haven't read but you tell me
17d
sixpathsofsimp
sixpathsofsimpLv4

hmm 🤔 is it a hentai type ot is the mc just , a wimp

AshlesSmiley:i kinda skimmed through the first couple chapters and mc wasn't really to my likings, although ill probably read it seriously some other time after more chapters. its really not the type that we read casually
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AshlesSmiley
AshlesSmileyLv4

wimp type, probably it gets better later tho

sixpathsofsimp:hmm 🤔 is it a hentai type ot is the mc just , a wimp
17d
sixpathsofsimp
sixpathsofsimpLv4

AshlesSmiley:wimp type, probably it gets better later tho
16d
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Vellkhan
VellkhanAuthor

I heard it's tradition here in webnovel to shamelessly write a review at your own work so here I am. At the start of this book not everything is revealed yet so the information I would provide or the overall story might be different than the original. I plan to write this story a bit dark 😉 You've been warned.

3mth

Doutor_Comunista
Doutor_ComunistaLv1

I don't have much to say other than that the beginning is promising and that this work has potential, the author just needs to not fill this work with harem and shameless things that for some reason the other actors do in their work which in my humble opinion, the only opinion that matters (just kidding) this work will be good. (I used Google Translate so if I ended up cursing someone it's Google's fault)

3mth
Sansdruper117
Sansdruper117Lv1

Without a doubt the story was going well but unfortunately the protagonist has a twin who has everything if a damn Garry Stu... The brother appears on screen more than the protagonist himself Another problem that needs to be discussed is the synthesis. The description of the story gives us to understand that he will be the son, but it never says that he will have a brother. Honestly, sometimes that is not necessary. Explain that the brother will be a secondary thing, the problem arises when the brother starts to have more importance than the protagonist, we all come only for the protagonist, not the brother.

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ArdaPendragon
ArdaPendragonLv4

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Aetherrr
AetherrrLv4

PEAK PEAK PEAK PEAK PEAK PEAK PEAK PEAK PEAK PEAK

1mth
shirou_sureiya
shirou_sureiyaLv4

so in short the plot is just the same the only difference is that mc is just there as spectator watching the events unfold and you will tell us you can't change the plot because of fate and destiny bullshit and there will be consequences if you did just like that demon slayer fanfic I read a year ago

1mth
DaoistBWt7Nl
DaoistBWt7NlLv2

Start was fine, middle chapterr are shaky it feels like the author is trying different styles. (which he confirms) and the current chapters are good. Though it's not for everyone.

17d
sleepybutter
sleepybutterLv4

Start is good, author just have to keep up with the quality and the concept is promising though there's a brother but I'll trust the author for now since this really has potential.

25d
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