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Not_a_DeadraLv45mth
2024-11-03 10:32

Honestly I’m not going to go into much but it’s just really good I highly recommend giving it a read.

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Msilver
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I did read up to 437. Over all story is good. But small details make it less in tone of LOM. I give an example as I read two stories simultaneously I can compare, in one MC created himself false identity for tarot club, because of certain circumstances he can't be seen by Klein. So he every time carefully think what and when he can speak and what reasonable knowledge for his created identity he can share with tarot club to not raise suspicions. His actions measured, detailed and carefully planned for steps steps ahead and consequences of his actions. This story? MC don't tried too hard to hide his identity and tarot members don't debout him nor they are curious of to where he got his very ADVANCED knowledge caps here for a reason. Main character sharing his knowledge without seconds thought, only on real key things that can actually kill tarot members he does filter, but over all zero trying to cover up. And none doubts from tarot members and outside world easley buy almost all his excuses. Now, characters themselves outside of some paranoia are written good. There is romance, but very very timid. Then MC himself, when it doesn't matter he acts okay, smart even. But at some plot moments you can almost actually see scenario log where author writes AUTHORS WILL MC -100 intelligence debuff. Same thing for characters when it's convenient to the plot they suddenly lost wisdom and intelligence. I read it avidly, but because quality is good, plot holes and characters stupidity look out of place and really spoils story for me.

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