This is my first novel, I love necromancers and wuxia settings so i figured why not combines them. I have a longgggg plan for this webnovel and would love some feedback if possible. Thank You!
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LIKEI’m Sorry about this I just have a lot of questions because i’m also a fan of Necromancer and Wuxia settings. 1. Will the MC’s undead have sentient with the same personality or will they have sentient with different personalities from when they were alive. 2. Will there be different types of undead the MC can create? 3. Can the Mc’s undead be upgraded to a higher form or gain new abilities. 4. Can the MC uses their abilities if they have some. 5. Can the undead turn into weapons, items, or fuse together? 6. Lastly, in the future will their be romance or harem? And if you do add any of these, just make sure they aren’t useless and can help out the MC instead of being the damsel in distress or just there to look beautiful while be the MC‘s greatest weakness.
Nice stuffs, I'll definitely add these to me novel.... Good thing I saw. Thanks for the ideas[img=strong]
I’m glad someone will be using my ideas in their novel. 😁 But before you do that can you also add an item that a subspace that can stores the dead, it also helps them recover from injuries. You can call it the 🧟♂️ Undead Palace 🧟♀️
undead palace? definitely sounds like something i can use.... making it a subspace though..hmm🤔 and then to help undeads recover? not so sure. Buh I'll try to fit it in somewhere. Thanks a lot
For the undead palace, I meant to have it where you can have the MC undead have a fight arena with various different facilities. If the MC have extra undead, and the MC doesn’t have plans to use them. He can try Something are the poison jar story: "the poison was prepared by placing many toxic insects in a closed vessel and allowing them to remain there until one had eaten all the rest – the toxin was then extracted from the survivor." This will allow you to create variations of types of undead. Basically you’ll be sacrifice quantity of undead for even stronger undead and probably with a new form with various different abilities. Is basically a place for him to gamble his undead away.