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2024-10-09 22:12

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Reincarnated with the country building system

Blackcovra
4.3
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Iopmu67
Iopmu67Lv1

Very Good story. Different from other stories. Because here the main character was an experienced soldier. Who has real combat experience. Also, the characters of the summoned soldiers have been beautifully portrayed. So that it feels real. It also seems that its world building will be the best

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War_of_King
War_of_KingLv2

Reveal spoiler

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AStarrr
AStarrrLv3

Very interesting story! This is only based off one chapter but I would definitely recommend for people who love fantasy

1mth
StarHarvester
StarHarvesterLv1

Interesting story. Really fantasy based. Not a bad thing, interesting to read. I think it is kinda funny the way that everything just happens to him all of a sudden and this it is like... boom... you are now in charge of a world!

1mth
Blackcovra
BlackcovraAuthor

Hello everyone 🤗 I'm going to make an announcement. I will delete this novel after two days. Because, I want to republish it after some revisions. So if you want any changes in this story then let me know. Also, if you have any suggestions on how I can make my story more interesting, please let me know. Finally thank you all for being with me.🥰 Please give your feedback 🙏 Please check my original works, You find the book there [New name: Reincarnated with country system]

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zachycards
zachycardsLv1

Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.

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Dragon_Heart9
Dragon_Heart9Lv12

It's a great novel. Can't wait to read more and see how the nation would grow[img=recommend]

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AkitoTakahashi
AkitoTakahashiLv3

Here we have a story mixed with historical and fantasy elements. I can already tell you that Alberto... Sorry, I mean Lt. Alberto, has some crazy goals in mind after being reincarnated. There's themes of duty, sacrifice, and rebirth—which is quite common for novels like this one. Black does an interesting job showing off the world-building. Not too bad of a new universe. The battles with mythical creatures were also a tad interesting. What more can you want in a fantasy realm? However, despite its strong premise, the pacing could use some work, particularly during exposition-heavy sections. Some readers may not have a problem with it, though. It's commendable nonetheless and could benefit from a tighter focus to maintain narrative momentum. A cover for the novel would also be pleasing to see. Other than that, interesting work there, Black.

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S_Wolfe
S_WolfeLv2

I love this novel every single thing in the novel is amazing it's a great fantasy novel I recommend to people who love fantasy Good job author[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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