Pretty good I like supporting new writings and this one has a lot of potential.

The story is good, it starts off a bit slow but around chapter 10 it starts to kick it up. The reason I say writing is low, is the author needs to use spell check or proof read the work. I’m 48 chapters in and there is so many spelling/grammar issues that takes me a second to decipher their intentions. They also have several areas where they forget what was mention in last chapter or even at beginning of current chapter making contradictory statements, for example they mention the MC was unconscious for nearly 24 hours and half a chapter later that 24 hours has been changed to an hour. All in all it’s a good read, just need to take some time and decipher the author’s intentions for the story. Hopefully this will be seen by author and they can adjust some in the future as it is a great story so far and I want to see it improve and continue.

Hello dear readers, it is I, the author. After having written so far, I feel llike I can finally leave a review(shamelessly hehehe...) I just want to say the book's world background, character design, story develop, and writing quality are all great, although this is my first webnovel, I really writing it just as much as you enjoy reading it. I'm going to write more and y'all are going to be reading more. I'm working on improving certain aspects like writing quality and update stability. Regardless, it's a great read so please, TRY IT OUT!!

first off according to author this world has a war every 20 years after 3 years of red skies for at least 3 generations. yet they act like this has never happened before in their preparing even with the speeding up. why wouldnt ur soldiers already have special training? why wait until last minute. next the family thing. so he gets killed off by his fathers decree for his brothers crime. thats what happened. yet the mother is still kissing this dude? without any comment either by author to explain the reasoning. she went from trying to fight him to lets have an anniversary party a few months after u killed our son. this could be a good book but also the forest arc and him staying out there without trying to get out is crazy especially when he could leave continent

I do not care for Damon or ashbourne, so why do they have more chapters than our MC?? The author dug himself a hole by putting the MC alone in the woods, so he has no one to talk to. This means you will need to skip atleast 30 chapters to get back to the MC. Do not read this story and if you do, wait until plenty has been released because this is the ultimate slow burn.

So far I think this story has amazing potential keep up the great work author

The MC might aswell not be the MC all he does is stay in the forrest and everyone else is the getting the MC treatment he's is the support character at this point this is a waste of potential

Like the idea of the story but the shit writing skills makes it unbearable to read as im spending more time processing what ur tryna say hope u can fix up the gramma as rn its unbearable

The beginning was interesting, but the author doesn't know how to carry the story, it got to a point where it became very boring and there are more than 50 chapters in which the MC doesn't appear and there are only secondary stories, it has the harem tag but in 200 chapters no one has appeared, in one chapter he says one thing and then completely changes it in the next. A lot of wasted potential. Don't waste your time reading, it's not worth it.

The novel starts strong and builds a solid foundation... Only to build the story in a completely different area. Interesting premise and writing style. The author focuses on the 2 brother's storline utilizing the different circumstances of each to build the world and write the lore. The contrast is further used to go from micro to macro and from personal to political. Great usage and contrast. The concept is similar to RR Martin's Song of Ice and Fire (Game of Thrones) though this one is a web novel version and isnt as professionally done. Thats it for the good parts of this novel. Where this novel falls short is on focus and continuity. The set up at the start was great and would have been interesting if there was a follow through. The abandonment and trechery with lies should have had more impact on the characters but apart for setting there doesnt seem to be much effect on their personalities and character development. 1 MC was sentenced to death and seems to quickly recover and is too trusting too fast with people, there seems to be little to no trauma considering all that abuse and injustice. Its almost the same with the 2nd MC with everything being resolved by his bilief and hope that his brother survived and the flimsy and simple justification of 'would you have allowed it' reasoning for filicide (parent killing their child). Then theres the setting, sending a child to an academy and underutilizing the theme. The academy setting felt wasted and unnecessary quickly followed by politics meetings to arrange meeting. The forest of death quickly became the forest of looting and levelling up and all the built up tension was lost. In short the author planted too many seeds too early resulting in what feels like forgettable chapters and mini arcs. The beasts are unique from each other but familiar in lore which is the result of good choices from the author. Theres personality with each one but not enough that it fills the novel excessively. The author also doesnt fall into the temptation of making them too overpowered or pulling out world breaking mythical beasts left and right. This novel has great potential and I am invested in reading further in hopes of it getting better. Planning for main and subplots and relating that to character development definitely needs work however the writing style and world building leaves enough room to recover. The strengths definitely make up for the foils.