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JJ_Spang
JJ_SpangLv15mth
2024-11-16 20:28

It has been going all the way but there are some things I was confused about like in the first few chapters it’s like 20 days where a summer vacation is around 70 so that confused me for a bit the main character designs good I like all the technology stuff it would be better if it was updating every now and then a specific time is it updates otherwise quite good though I’m confused so when you said ben all aliens does that mean every alien Ben 10 universe I just walked in the stream where are the data stored or like every single alien in Ben 10

Reincarnated In Ben 10

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Rehman_Muneeb
Rehman_MuneebLv4

please add some romance

4mth
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MARLENE_ANGEL
MARLENE_ANGELLv1

AUTHOR BEN 10 CHARACTER WILL BE A WASTE IF ONLY ONE WORLD THIS NEED TO BE MULTIVERSE STORY OF 3000 CHAPTER,,, with alien x he can do it..THIS CHANGES THE GAME..NARUTO-MUSHOKU TENSEI-CYBERPUNK 2077-BUFFY-WITCHER-SUPERNATURAL-DC-MARVEL-TENSURA-GOD OF WAR 4-OVERLORD-BLEACH-LORD OF THE RING

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CYBer_traveler
CYBer_travelerLv2

It's a very interesting story. I'm looking forward to seeing your next story update.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=thinking][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]

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Aden_Sky_8467
Aden_Sky_8467Lv3

keep up the good work author san .......

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incest_fucker
incest_fuckerLv4

harem yes or no. can you tell meeeeeeee

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ProdigiousKriatori
ProdigiousKriatoriLv3

I’ll start off by saying the writings ok some things could be done for the story to flow smoother but that’s just semantics. Updates could be better. Story developed as you would expect pretty predictable and with the Mc around it’s just like Ben 10 all over again just with a babysitter their own age who just so happened to be a reincarnated adult. MCs pretty bland it’s like watching a copy paste of Ben 10 the mc mine as well be Kevin. Feel like the story would have more potential as a mashup world if the author did it right it something along those lines. Basically this novel lacks creativity. Either way not a bad read but could be darker maybe more mature but yeah this story is pretty dull. If the author has any comments or concerns about this review I’m happy to respond.

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