this is by far the most idiotic review I've ever seen. Some of you readers feel like you have the freedom to bash authors and say what you feel like and when an author speaks in defence of their work, it's so surprising to you. What deleted comment are you even talking about? I didn't delete any comment about the coming of age ritual, very much explained that since Eros is the God of desire and sex, to get his powers, you must perform acts of either. Also, what are you talking about me liking whores, what the hell kind of assessment is that? What astounding level of intuition you have to know that much about what I like in 7 chapters out of 130+ chapters that you've rated it one because of your personal bias, and you think I'll take any thing you've said here seriously. Being critically reviewed is one thing, and that's what I want, not nonsensical things like this. You said absolutely nothing about the story, plot, characters or anything. Oh my days.

Ya bet you didnt read what I said, you, unprovoked attacked multiple readers because they pointed out mistakes it happens a few times at the beginning. And there is a deleted one it even says it nice try though. I left a comment to it as well. Also I did point out problems with the plot and I pointed out why I didn’t like it I’m not going to read 100 chapters of a novel I dont like just to write a comment. And readers can criticize writers it’s the entire point of WebNovel you know? For writers to learn what people want and dislike or telling the authors what to do or not to do etc. not for authors to just do it to get money this is a stepping stone for those learning to write as otherwise they wouldn’t use this site. For example publishing on this site means WebNovel has the liscence to it and control over it so no one uses this, unless as a stepping stone or just because they don’t have the popularity or skill to advance. The readers comments are what helps authors learn what to do when writing and what people like and dislike. Many people talk bad about this book throughout the chapters with the problems. My point is you have so many that it seems you could care less and are only doing it for money and will write it how you want no matter what which would be fine if you actually wrote it in a way people would like it but you didn’t.

you would lose that bet, lol. There's literally no place in your review where you critiqued this novel. A review talks about world background, character, update style, and others, and you managed to come up with one under all those criteria in seven chapters. Get out of it, man. And stop talking to me like I don't know how webnovel works. This isn't my first account, I've been in this app for a long time. I know to listen to readers, but that DOESN'T MEAN THAT READERS ARE ALWAYS RIGHT! So I don't understand why you say in one line that I'm writing and not listening to readers for what they want, and in another line you say that I'm writing just to make money. Clearly, if the book is earning money, then the readers reading it, like it enough to pay for it. And that is fine for me. I don't care about bloated readers like yourself who can't stand authors who know how to stand for themselves from you annoying bullies. Gave a review from nothing but your bias of your me arguing with a reader and you expect any of your crap to be taken seriously. Try not being a bully in your near future and try to give honest reviews or don't give any at all. I'll keep up writing stories that readers want to read, and when does readers give me feedback, critic me constructively, or give me suggestions, I always adjust. Always. Many readers here can testify to that. Who I don't listen to, it's bloated blokes like you.

Heck after you kept denying your comment was deleted I’m sure you needed to make it look like you didn’t know so people didn’t know you deleted it after I mentioned you can still see it under your comments. Then had to defend yourself the day after saying it kept showing deleted as if I didn’t point it out and you kept denying it? So which is it you deleted it or kept accusing me of lying without checking at the same time as insulting me continuously for many other things that you seemed to have not read properly about when it’s easy to see

You also thanked a guy in his review when all he did was ask a question? Which of us did you say had the bias again?

You still haven't shown me the comment I deleted. What comment did I freaking delete? What is so damning that I would delete it? This your comment is literally the most negative one I've gotten and it's here. So what comment did I delete?

You still haven't shown me the comment I deleted. What comment did I freaking delete? What is aso damning that I would delete it? This your comment is literally the most negative one I've gotten and it's here. So what comment did I delete? Gosh. And of course I'm going to thank people for giving me a positive review even if they didn't state the review details, they just gave the stars and asked a question. I have no way of discerning the contents of their review, but I can discern yours. And yours unlike theirs is very bias and has nothing to do with the actual reviewing of a novel, so shut up for once.

by the way. that's not a deleted comment.Why on God's green earth would I delete that comment that is also literally in the comment section of the story too. I can see the comment on my author account, but I can't see it in my reader account. This is not a new thing. It happens a lot with many authors book here where even some reviews don't show.

It pops up as a deleted comment which everyone sees it as so once again try again as that’s not how it works. And once again you didn’t fully read something before commenting. Also this is most definitely not the most negative comment if you actually remember the amount of people you attacked for having a negative view of your book maybe you would realize that?

What a pack of balooney. The amount of people you're talking about are the two guys? One who we argued about the definition of a harem and the other who we briefly argued about Dagwood's character in the first chapter.? That's the amount of people 😅? And then again, bring where it says deleted comment please. Cause I didn't delete nothing. I can't even think of a reason why I would.